All Comments on 'Truly Perverted Mommy'

Going to see what other things you've done.

A little over the top, but I loved it. Very much up to your usual high standards, you're a fine author. Liked the way you mixed a wide variety of kinks together. You're right, though, probably not to everyone's taste, thanks for having the courage to do this. Five stars!

Just read this over at xnxx, both parts were very interesting, not my cup of tea but still hot, keep it going buddy.

Really liked this kinky tale. Please continue it for some time. Thanks.

Great story and great writing but there is one thing missing. What happened when Granny arrived?

your writing style - particularly in dialogue - is totally unrealistic

I'm warming up to their mother having a six and a half inch dick, and that's really original.

I want to read about their day with Gran.

Thanks for the read

I enjoyed it...interesting..I saw a movie sleepaway camp with a girl who had a cock.it turns me on

Plagiarism. The names have been changed, but not much else.

Would love to get totally fucked up and sucked out we this family, reaching insane levels of sexual pleasure,so fucking kinky and pervy. Just pure fucking and sucking,want to be fucked and sucked into oblivion by these four cunts.

If this story appears anywhere else in a similar vein, it has been stolen / lifted from ME. While I've read stories similar (and been inspired by them) all of my pieces are original. Every author gets accused of plagiarism - it happened to me once before.

HOWEVER in that previous incident, the person who requested I write said story "Her Special Ingredient" came to my defense as did the author I the story I was accused of ripping off.

NEXT - I have written some 1600 stories - and more on the way - so is it possible someone ripped ME off? I write for magazines and not always under the BrettJ moniker - PLUS I wrote this story for another site (XNXX stories) before they changed their rules.

Believe me, I don't have to plagiarize - after over 500 stories, there's no need.

BTW, if you're going to accuse someone of plagiarism, it's tacky to do so anonymously. I stand behind 100% of my works with my name attached.

Always have enjoyed YOUR STORIES!!

I fantasize about watching something like this, hermaphrodite incest of my neighbors.

Meh, adopted isn't incest!

Great imagination, loved every word, will read them all

Yeah, this story unfolded in a way that was just too much, too soon, too fast. It all just felt unbelievable. The sex scene could have gone on a bit longer and been more descriptive as well. Mom’s cock should have been larger. Yeah, 7 inches is above average in reality, but in the realm of futa porn, that’s downright tiny. As at least one commenter already pointed out, if the daughters are adopted, it isn’t truly incest, which takes away from that taboo element. 2/5

I liked it,love the mother and daughters wanting too suck and fuck there on mother. I'm about having a real huge cock to suck want more.

This is the most unusual mutually consensual incestuous love story I have ever read. Although the plot has been logically developed and the characters appear life-like and honestly normal, even the mother, the situations just feels strange. In light of the preceding, I thoroughly enjoy ths story.