A little over the top, but I loved it. Very much up to your usual high standards, you're a fine author. Liked the way you mixed a wide variety of kinks together. You're right, though, probably not to everyone's taste, thanks for having the courage to do this. Five stars!
English
Real kinky, Loved it.
Going to see what other things you've done.
Great story
A little over the top, but I loved it. Very much up to your usual high standards, you're a fine author. Liked the way you mixed a wide variety of kinks together. You're right, though, probably not to everyone's taste, thanks for having the courage to do this. Five stars!
XNXX
Just read this over at xnxx, both parts were very interesting, not my cup of tea but still hot, keep it going buddy.
Truly Perverted!
Really liked this kinky tale. Please continue it for some time. Thanks.
Great Story
Great story and great writing but there is one thing missing. What happened when Granny arrived?
Sorry, just doesn't work
your writing style - particularly in dialogue - is totally unrealistic
It"s certainly a different kind of story
I'm warming up to their mother having a six and a half inch dick, and that's really original.
I want to read about their day with Gran.
Thanks for the read
aa compliment...,
I enjoyed it...interesting..I saw a movie sleepaway camp with a girl who had a cock.it turns me on
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