Man of the Family Ch. 01

It REALLY is all bullshit........... but

I can't beleieve that your imagination didn't allow you to fuck your mother up the arse, really hard and fast. A finger up your grandmother's shit hole gave me hope, but alas, nobody's arse got severly violated.

Pity that there wasn't an anus prolapse......pity.

Enjoyable first chapter

Jerry in Washington state, USA - While patiently (?) awaiting new chapters to your story series "A Nudge To The Grey Matter" and "Family Matters", I still check out any new stories. I usually have no desire to read yet another of the numerous "porn king sized cock" stories that flood Literotica, but I did enjoy some aspects of your story. I liked that you spent a decent amount of time on the drawbacks of a far larger-than-average cock and I felt that Aunt Peg not immediately joining the huge-cock-fan-club was a touch of realism to the story. I do look forward to Aunt Peg beiong seduced into the incest club. Since you came up with ages so that Grandma is so young at 52, maybe you can introduce Great Grandma (who probably wasn't mentioned previously because she doesn't live near the rest of the family). A woman in her late 60s, early 70s, can still be a fantastic loving, sexual partner. I am interested in your future chapters, and hope there are several. In the meantime, I will enjoy your other stories.

WOW!!!

I've read and admired most of your previous submissions and this story is right up there with the best. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Just a thought

Just as an idle thought, maybe this should be listed under fantasy, the fantasy of every guy in the world. Actually I found the frequency of the sex detracted from what is otherwise a hot story.

Definitely wanting more

I loved the somewhat semi-realism and the ages of everyone.
I can't wait to see what else you can imagine.

LOVED IT

Waiting for chapter 2. Great read..

awesome

This Is Nothing!!!!!!!!

But Hot Hot Sex!!!!!!! Great Read(Thank You)

doule gift

truly awesome, i wish i was 18 again and getting the same present, loved it immensely, thank you.

Super erotic

A little on the outrageous side but hot and wild. The story kept me entertained throughout the read.

He still has his aunt and sister yet to mount and I hope that will happen in the next chapter.

Thanks for the read .

Love the Story

Can't wait to see where are Stud goe's from here .
it sounds like Aunt Peg and maybe sis could be Next.
and if sis get's involved she could bring him some
College Coeds?

Great Story

Wonderfully written and highly arousing.

Definitely looking forward to the next installment.

Thanks for sharing.

^_^

168 exclamation points!

Great story

Awesome story, hope to have more of this series soon!

Such a good story....

Finished Chapter 2 The story so far is so hot it made me wish i had his problem ;) and most definitely the help of such sexy women. Looking forward for more

Awesome

Just an awesome frigging story. Great work. nasty Mind. Love it.

Contrived, and horrible.

Sorry, but the premise of the story remains solid, but your writing of it, in this case, left a lot to be desired. It's not the theme, it's the way in which you've tried to write it.

Sorry, it's my opinion.

To: Lo_Pan

No writer expects to make every reader happy to have read his story. Sorry this one didn't work for you like it did for Rosspal (comment before yours).

Thanks to both of you for reading AND commenting.

dezurtdawg

Great Story!!

That Lo_Pan guy must not know what a good erotic story is if he didn't like yours. This was a very good erotic story. It had a little bit of humor added to it that even made it better. GREAT JOB, I hope you can write some more. :) 5***** toby9790.

Good story

Hey it was a good story man keep up the good work

GOOD AND "EROTIC" STORY.

I thoroughly enjoyed your story. I would have preferred for the sister to have been involved from the beginning since brother sister love is my main interest, but, that's just me.

good read

Very good read although it seemed to go off a little at the end as I thought that gram came to his house not him going to hers

FUCK YES!!!!

Beautiful SO beautiful, his mum, his gran, now please his aunt - he MUST make at least one pregnant.

Thankyou for a beautiful story.

Sarah Leather, London England.

leathercatsuitgirl@hotmail.co.uk

Great ................

Oh where is " the littlt sister" ? Fucking sister her mother & her BIG grand MoM is realy grate eRoTiCk story. I Susan 47 needs cock like ZiM.... Oh my son I love your rampant prick.

Very fucking hot!! Now he needs to get his aunt as well.

horny aussie

Loved the story and also like the other person can not wait to get into chapter two and see Jim fuck his aunt and I hope he gets her pregnant, also I'd like to see him fuck his sister and maybe get her pregnant would be a good thing, so here's hoping.

If his mom told his grandmother,why did she act suprprised when she found them?

To 'Anonamous' of 8-13-14

Man am I confused! Just whose story were you reading before you posted your comment because I most certainly did NOT write that! Perhaps you should re-read my story and then answer the question yourself.

Thanks for reading my tale and the comment, however confusing it is to me.

dezurtdawg

To Writer

I think the other guy meant the part that Karla said "You were right, Dana, he does cum in buckets" since the part before Dana still in shock of Karla found out about them.

Great story, loved it!

Hai Friends

Very good and hot .Walking with grandma while fucking is very hot
Thanks to the writer .Love u Susan-47 . Add me in whatsapp 9846721393

Thoughts

Overall your detail oriented writing is good, however I see a few problem areas for sure and one thing that is in this story among others you've written is having grandma part of the harem... Just doesn't do it for me, but I guess whatever floats your boat. Anyways with this particular story aside from the grandma thing, I had to laugh at the ridiculousness of the ages at the start, his mom marrying at that age let alone having 2 children? I know this is fantasy but c'mon, that's kinda out there, and to me it seemed like the only reason you did so was so you had an excuse to have a young mom and grandma. Now while I enjoy your stories I wish they were better because it's evident in your style that you "can" write, but this story as well as the rest I've read from you suffer from the same problem: You tend to write the minimum amount of plot to start the story and lay out the guidelines, then once you get to the sex you cut the strings and that's all that happens the rest of the chapter, just sex sex sex... which gets old very fast and makes a 5 star story into a 2 star. Sometimes less is more and I would love your stories so much more if you learned this lesson and learned how to spread out the sex scenes and give us more plotline and dialogue, different sceneries etc in between so we have an actual story to read instead of pages of "ohhh GOD fuck me" over and over repeatedly.