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Just 3 *...
Just 3 * because there are an end, yes, but just what happen to the selfish cheating wife?
No ending?
That earned you a two, Bob. A great start to a story that ended with a whimper.
Doesn't love her
Obviously doesn't love her. If he did he would've been out that door in a minute. No m,an that loves a woman would've sat there and let it happen. Might still divorce her, but would've stopped it anyway. Needs to divorce her of course. That's a given.
The only reason I read this stupid thing,
was because somebody else has written an end to it. I can't believe this idiot author has a following! He must appeal to the masochists. As far as I'm concerned, he's simply to damn lazy to ever finish a story.
This is a complete, good story
Yea we could have learned more about Sally. Why she decided to blow up her marriage and humiliate her husband but it was a short, complete story with an ending: they were getting divorced. No one should doubt it after the way she carried on. Husband was having a bad day, snapped at his wife when he told her he needed to go out of town to save his job. Its not like he volunteered or tried to fuck up her life. He was just doing what he had to do. She has sex in public, humiliates him by shoving her adultery in his face and then fucks the guy again in front of their neighbors. What other kind of ending is there for this story? JPB does often leave a story without a clear ending. This was not one. 4 stars.
Not your best but better than 99% of the LW stories written these days.
The sequel is NOT the same story. Too many changes in the character of the wife and no real remorse on her part. Thank you JPB for all of your work. You belong in the LW Hall of Fame
Is that it
Started well, finished poorly, what more is there to be said. 2 **
Cuckold Fantasy
If you are a cuckold wannabe like me, this story was fun to read. I especially liked how she gave Sam head at the airport. The phone call was a bit abrupt, which made it unrealistic, but I still enjoyed the writing. I have pictured myself being hidden in our garage with my wife coming home with a colleague, watching her head disappear as he smiles and smirks. I plan to read the sequel now. Very hot!
I wish
You could give a score of a minus 5 for assholes who can't finish a story.
Pissed off.
I let my rage out on both their genitals while they were in the back seat of the mustang in the driveway. That was just the start of the bloodshed. My sequels to most of JPB's stories would belong in the Horror section.
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