Obviously doesn't love her. If he did he would've been out that door in a minute. No m,an that loves a woman would've sat there and let it happen. Might still divorce her, but would've stopped it anyway. Needs to divorce her of course. That's a given.
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Anonymous08/16/14
The only reason I read this stupid thing,
was because somebody else has written an end to it. I can't believe this idiot author has a following! He must appeal to the masochists. As far as I'm concerned, he's simply to damn lazy to ever finish a story.
by
Anonymous08/17/14
This is a complete, good story
Yea we could have learned more about Sally. Why she decided to blow up her marriage and humiliate her husband but it was a short, complete story with an ending: they were getting divorced. No one should doubt it after the way she carried on. Husband was having a bad day, snapped at his wife when he told her he needed to go out of town to save his job. Its not like he volunteered or tried to fuck up her life. He was just doing what he had to do. She has sex in public, humiliates him by shoving her adultery in his face and then fucks the guy again in front of their neighbors. What other kind of ending is there for this story? JPB does often leave a story without a clear ending. This was not one. 4 stars.
Not your best but better than 99% of the LW stories written these days.
The sequel is NOT the same story. Too many changes in the character of the wife and no real remorse on her part. Thank you JPB for all of your work. You belong in the LW Hall of Fame
If you are a cuckold wannabe like me, this story was fun to read. I especially liked how she gave Sam head at the airport. The phone call was a bit abrupt, which made it unrealistic, but I still enjoyed the writing. I have pictured myself being hidden in our garage with my wife coming home with a colleague, watching her head disappear as he smiles and smirks. I plan to read the sequel now. Very hot!
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Anonymous08/28/14
I wish
You could give a score of a minus 5 for assholes who can't finish a story.
I let my rage out on both their genitals while they were in the back seat of the mustang in the driveway. That was just the start of the bloodshed. My sequels to most of JPB's stories would belong in the Horror section.
JPB is a sorry individual who posts his pathetic tales to spite his approaching death.
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Anonymous06/02/15
To "Anon," Calflash, & Happydoodle
You totally ream JPB a new one on this story, and yet, there is NOTHING in your own story file. If YOU can do SO much better, why don't you try to finish this tale?
I don't think you are up to his level ( which sometimes isn't all that high), to where you could write the ending! Challenge accepted, anyone??? I didn't think so.
What is the saying? Oh yeah: "Those who can't do, teach. Those who can't teach, criticize." It's not perfect, but it is HIS story.
BigK
there's a story in here but try as I might, I couldn't find it (unless there's a part 2).
JPB has taken a full page to tell us
1. He had a bad day, culminating in being told to btravel and break an engagement planned for 3 months.
2. His wife was totally pissed off (understandable) but ragged on him for putting his work ahead of her. (stupid cunt).
3. He let her have it and told her to fuck off (stupid arsehole).
4. She fucked some guy and rubbed his nose in it. (Really stupid cunt).
5. He came home and decide to fuck her over. (Great).
No background, no idea what kind of marriage, has she done this before, do they just coexist, what he's going to do. In short - nothing.
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Anonymous10/19/15
And Sally should be history
John works to put a roof over their head and food in their mouths and if you've ever worked in a big Company and had your Boss tell you to get jumping on something your only question is high how you need to jump to keep your job. So while she may have been disappointed about the theater it seems to me she could have found a girlfriend to go with her and been a little more understanding of John's job requirements. Who wouldn't divorce a wife that had reacted to bad news by having an affair? Not the kind of woman you want to be married to. I would have liked to see more written about the fallout and the divorce. Maybe some revenge on the wife and her lover, but that's not going to happen in a JPB story. Well played Bob. Well played.
I read this story about 3 years ago and did not like it then. I felt it was not finished and guessed that Bob would never write a 2nd chapter. I was right.
Some have said that the ending was good because the husband indicated that the wife was history. Well, considering how Bob writes and the little detail he gave us in this submission, let's follow that to the logical conclusion shall we.
First, it is obvious that the wife has little love for her husband. She could not have done what she did if she still loved him. Given that, it is doubtful there will be any crying on her part over a divorce.
Second, even if they lived in a state where filing for adultery would have any impact, he has no proof so he is out of luck there. There will be a 50/50 split. Since he probably makes significantly more money than she does, he will probably end up paying her alimony or some type of maintenance for some extended period of time.
In the end, she will get half of the community assets in addition to the maintenance. She will probably move in with her buddy Sam and they will have a great time traveling and screwing on the beach on the exes dime.
He will get half of the assets, the opportunity to pay court costs and lawyer's fees, another monthly bill and his right hand until (with a limited budget) he can line up something else.
Unfortunately, since Bob did not finish the story, this is the only conclusion I can imagine. I prefer justice in a story. There is none indicated here.
She berates him about his "precious job," but you can bet if he refused to go to Boston, took her to the play and got fired, she'd be call him a loser and dump his ass!
English
Just 3 *...
Just 3 * because there are an end, yes, but just what happen to the selfish cheating wife?
No ending?
That earned you a two, Bob. A great start to a story that ended with a whimper.
Doesn't love her
Obviously doesn't love her. If he did he would've been out that door in a minute. No m,an that loves a woman would've sat there and let it happen. Might still divorce her, but would've stopped it anyway. Needs to divorce her of course. That's a given.
The only reason I read this stupid thing,
was because somebody else has written an end to it. I can't believe this idiot author has a following! He must appeal to the masochists. As far as I'm concerned, he's simply to damn lazy to ever finish a story.
This is a complete, good story
Yea we could have learned more about Sally. Why she decided to blow up her marriage and humiliate her husband but it was a short, complete story with an ending: they were getting divorced. No one should doubt it after the way she carried on. Husband was having a bad day, snapped at his wife when he told her he needed to go out of town to save his job. Its not like he volunteered or tried to fuck up her life. He was just doing what he had to do. She has sex in public, humiliates him by shoving her adultery in his face and then fucks the guy again in front of their neighbors. What other kind of ending is there for this story? JPB does often leave a story without a clear ending. This was not one. 4 stars.
Not your best but better than 99% of the LW stories written these days.
The sequel is NOT the same story. Too many changes in the character of the wife and no real remorse on her part. Thank you JPB for all of your work. You belong in the LW Hall of Fame
Is that it
Started well, finished poorly, what more is there to be said. 2 **
Cuckold Fantasy
If you are a cuckold wannabe like me, this story was fun to read. I especially liked how she gave Sam head at the airport. The phone call was a bit abrupt, which made it unrealistic, but I still enjoyed the writing. I have pictured myself being hidden in our garage with my wife coming home with a colleague, watching her head disappear as he smiles and smirks. I plan to read the sequel now. Very hot!
I wish
You could give a score of a minus 5 for assholes who can't finish a story.
Pissed off.
I let my rage out on both their genitals while they were in the back seat of the mustang in the driveway. That was just the start of the bloodshed. My sequels to most of JPB's stories would belong in the Horror section.
typical
typical "brain fart" story from the master of such. Write a complete story or give it up.
Not Bad
But unfinished.
Usual crap from this old decreipit dying fart.
JPB is a sorry individual who posts his pathetic tales to spite his approaching death.
To "Anon," Calflash, & Happydoodle
You totally ream JPB a new one on this story, and yet, there is NOTHING in your own story file. If YOU can do SO much better, why don't you try to finish this tale?
I don't think you are up to his level ( which sometimes isn't all that high), to where you could write the ending! Challenge accepted, anyone??? I didn't think so.
What is the saying? Oh yeah: "Those who can't do, teach. Those who can't teach, criticize." It's not perfect, but it is HIS story.
BigK
I'm sure
there's a story in here but try as I might, I couldn't find it (unless there's a part 2).
JPB has taken a full page to tell us
1. He had a bad day, culminating in being told to btravel and break an engagement planned for 3 months.
2. His wife was totally pissed off (understandable) but ragged on him for putting his work ahead of her. (stupid cunt).
3. He let her have it and told her to fuck off (stupid arsehole).
4. She fucked some guy and rubbed his nose in it. (Really stupid cunt).
5. He came home and decide to fuck her over. (Great).
No background, no idea what kind of marriage, has she done this before, do they just coexist, what he's going to do. In short - nothing.
And Sally should be history
John works to put a roof over their head and food in their mouths and if you've ever worked in a big Company and had your Boss tell you to get jumping on something your only question is high how you need to jump to keep your job. So while she may have been disappointed about the theater it seems to me she could have found a girlfriend to go with her and been a little more understanding of John's job requirements. Who wouldn't divorce a wife that had reacted to bad news by having an affair? Not the kind of woman you want to be married to. I would have liked to see more written about the fallout and the divorce. Maybe some revenge on the wife and her lover, but that's not going to happen in a JPB story. Well played Bob. Well played.
Read it Again, Unfortunately
I read this story about 3 years ago and did not like it then. I felt it was not finished and guessed that Bob would never write a 2nd chapter. I was right.
Some have said that the ending was good because the husband indicated that the wife was history. Well, considering how Bob writes and the little detail he gave us in this submission, let's follow that to the logical conclusion shall we.
First, it is obvious that the wife has little love for her husband. She could not have done what she did if she still loved him. Given that, it is doubtful there will be any crying on her part over a divorce.
Second, even if they lived in a state where filing for adultery would have any impact, he has no proof so he is out of luck there. There will be a 50/50 split. Since he probably makes significantly more money than she does, he will probably end up paying her alimony or some type of maintenance for some extended period of time.
In the end, she will get half of the community assets in addition to the maintenance. She will probably move in with her buddy Sam and they will have a great time traveling and screwing on the beach on the exes dime.
He will get half of the assets, the opportunity to pay court costs and lawyer's fees, another monthly bill and his right hand until (with a limited budget) he can line up something else.
Unfortunately, since Bob did not finish the story, this is the only conclusion I can imagine. I prefer justice in a story. There is none indicated here.
Cunt!
She berates him about his "precious job," but you can bet if he refused to go to Boston, took her to the play and got fired, she'd be call him a loser and dump his ass!
finish??
Now what?
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