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Could The Past Truly Be Her Future? Ch. 02

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by Anonymous04/28/11

5 stars

Please continue it soon...

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by LoneStarRider04/29/11

"scotch and coke"???????

I suppose that a few people might drink that cocktail in the privacy of their own home. Nobody orders that drink at any decent bar anywhere in America.
Aside from that, the story is interesting. It would be better writing if the author would stop slipping between present and past tense.

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