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I disagree with Anonymous
I thought it was well written, it reads longer than it actually is and it was quite enjoyable. I would like to see Jim join the main character in a little play with Cindy. There are so many ways it could go!
Very hot
Little bits of character development, just enough to make it feel real. Good descriptions of erotic and slightly kinky sex. A nice stroke story!
Awesome!!!
This is one of the best stories that I have read in awhile on this site. Very good subject matter. Write a sequel!
Great first effort
Your foreshadowing eludes to Nick furthering the depth and restrictions of Jim's cuckolding. Looking forward to seeing what you have in store.
Actually
Actually, I thought it was quite good. You did not go down that route where the wife and lover humiliate the husband, the story played well off both of their somewhat submissive natures without destroying the relationship and without making him into a "wimp", at least not a humiliated wimp. So...it was more of an open marriage then a cheating wife story. Good Job, I don't enjoy most of these, but you pulled it off.
Great job...
Great job... a very easy and thoroughly entertaining read! Well done!
A nicely developed storyline
The story didn't humiliate her husband and the three of them had a good time.
Well done.
I would like to read another tryst between the two to them and how she acts like the cum slut she wants to be.
Thanks for the good read.
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