AN OK story. I personally don't like the false modesty of they tell me... or they seem to like me to..., but that's just me.
Your characters are a couple of really really promiscuous people, and thank heaven they found each other, because a guy that fucked hundreds of women is not everybody's idea of husband material. But Vicky doesn't mind and sounds like Vicky she's much the same way.
So everything's nice, endless happy sex, life is just a dream?
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Anonymous03/16/11
Yikes,
there's nothing to like about this story. Just a guy bragging about his big cock and a cheating slut married to someone else.
It maybe a set up for a story, but this one doesn't even do that. There's no problem, no unrealized fantasy, no people from the past that could cause a problem, no friend could to cause them a probem, no tension, not mystery, etc., etc. It's intro that really does not go anywhere.
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Anonymous03/17/11
Yawn
A cheating bitch wife and the asshole who slept with her and later married her.
To pieces of worthless trash hooking up in the dump.
English
Those two are made for each other
AN OK story. I personally don't like the false modesty of they tell me... or they seem to like me to..., but that's just me.
Your characters are a couple of really really promiscuous people, and thank heaven they found each other, because a guy that fucked hundreds of women is not everybody's idea of husband material. But Vicky doesn't mind and sounds like Vicky she's much the same way.
So everything's nice, endless happy sex, life is just a dream?
Yikes,
there's nothing to like about this story. Just a guy bragging about his big cock and a cheating slut married to someone else.
Well, sorry, but an introduction is not a story.
It maybe a set up for a story, but this one doesn't even do that. There's no problem, no unrealized fantasy, no people from the past that could cause a problem, no friend could to cause them a probem, no tension, not mystery, etc., etc. It's intro that really does not go anywhere.
Yawn
A cheating bitch wife and the asshole who slept with her and later married her.
To pieces of worthless trash hooking up in the dump.
What A Bummer!!!
ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ. 40J what was she a cow??????
Don't Be So Hard on the New Author
It's a story about fucking, so just treat it that way. The new Mrs. Is probably out fucking a new guy now anyway.
Crap
Mindless fucking fodder. The imaginings of a mentally insane sex-starved lothario wanna-be impotent asshole.
HA Ha ha
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