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mmmmmmmmmm-good!
My wife and I talk about something similar to this story -- not that she harbors such a fantasy for her own sake -- but because she knows the idea turns me on. In her fantasy, the guy would fuck both of us lol.
Story was good, but...
I would have rated this story higher, but it contained many many spelling and gramatical errors that pulled me away from the story. Maybe you could have someone proof read stories you write in the future and correct your spelling, etc, before submitting them. Again, great story.
Go, Go, Go
Never mind the spelling mistakes it really got me going, now wheres my wife
Hard is the word
I'm still hard after that i'll be needing a lot more of the same loved every bit still raging hard writing this great.
Great Story!
Really got my mouth watering for cock!
mmmmmmmmmmm very good!
well thats one way to make me rock hard!! keep those cumming
careful honey
My wife started me sucking cock and now I have got rid of her and do only men. The feeling I get from another mans cock is the greatest feeling a man can have. So guys treat yourself to a great cock and you will wonder why you waited so long.
hard cock night
i have fantasized about that for a long time. but wow do i love a cock in my ass, much more so than just sucking.
Proofread
Decent story. Too many gramatical errors.
spelling
enjoyed the plot very much, but the spelling detracted from an otherwise good story.
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