Your stories are always "meat and potatoes." No overblown background or buildup needed. No unnecessary side-bars. Just wham-bam and kick ass. It usually works well. This time I think it worked. Revenge can be sweet.
This genre of loving wives stories is the best out there and make my day when I see them.
I don't understand all the other "like to watch" or "wimp" stories you or any others write. In any case this is a good one. I'd have liked to see a little more discussion at the end, her a little more emotionally hurt and shocked, maybe a little more buildup, but hey, great story!
He had gotten them all fired, tossed into jail, and divorced. So he needs to go beat the guys up and nothing happens to him? The two guys don't seek retribution and beat him up?? Then he has to brag about what he did to his ex? When no one knew he had been involved the cops wouldn't be checking his activities but now that the ex knows the cops could know and start checking. It's likely someone "he knows" would let something slip. He is so careful and calculating all the way through and then risks it all? Pretty stupid and he hasn't been a stupid man. The ending doesn't fit his character. Do an anonymous beat down on the guys and keep your mouth shut. Their lives have gone to shit, he can enjoy his little secret just like she enjoyed hers. Of course he could find ways to rub her face in her misery without giving himself away.
Good unexpected treachery and disrespect are met with a cerebral comeuppance... Bravo! With a bit of districts for good measure. I enjoy the cheating spouses reasoning for their betrayal, but I was still entertained nonetheless. Thanks for the real man story!
Just Plain Bob? You're kidding, aren't you. He doesn't give the revenge angle like this, does he. Thank You, for expanding yourself to new possibilities.
This one is a definite, TTB (torch the bitch) tale that hits all the right buttons and satisfies the revenge crowd, including me. Too bad one couldn't get away with something like this. A better angle might have been to also plant some kiddie porn on Mark and his buddy. The cops might have then charged them with something along those lines, and guess what happens to child pornographers (and child rapists) in prison?
JPB left out the part about suing the company and board of directors for their failure to enforce morals, etc. etc. Oh, I know it is none of the executives' business what employees do on their own time, but given the info near the beginning of the story, it is clear many if not most of the employees at the party knew what Sabrina and her friends were up to. So the company can be held responsible, at least by a creative lawyer..
No he wasn't a wimp, just disappointed. Glad you did not make him out to be over the top. Just simple calculated angry response. Just enough irony, conflict and character development too. Enjoyed it as much as you did writing it.
Black & Tan Blues by ItMgr. Great for short fantasy read, but not nearly as in depth or, thus, as believable as Black & Tan.
And while I really like your stories--and dutifully and with glee read all of them--you have clearly demonstrated the ability to write longer, more in depth stories.
So please make an old fan happy: Give us another longer one with better characterization.
The ONLY reason WHY this author JPB writes a story like this... with a real plot... good characters... good consistenncy and based on semi- realisitic situation is that.... he wants to keep YOU guessing.
You see JPB really does NOT like writing stories like this. MOST of his stuff revolves idiot husbands... sexual deviants... cream pies.. and brain dead hetrosexual men. Therefore one can infer that JPB likes THOSE kind of stories and NOT this kind.
This story PROVES he can do better but MOST of his stories are NOT like this one. Hhence the large number of readers who are stunned by this one. But that raises a bigegr question: WHY does JPB every so often ...write a good story?
To keep YOU the reader guessing and reading.
The biggest MYTH at LIT is that JPB only writes for himself and he doesnt really care all that Much about what the reader thinks.
Stuff like this happens every day. I don't know why some people think it isn't so. I have read comments before that say anyone who does something like that will spend some time at the Hilton. It ain't so. A third of the rapes are unsolved in my state. I'll bet there are a few unsolved disappearances too. The actions described here are everyday life for some, and believe me, most of them are not caught. There are people who do not call the cops or a lawyer when things go wrong. When someone is threatened correctly, they will feel threatened. People get away with breaking the law more than not. Everyday. But, thinking otherwise makes people feel safer doesn't it?
You always seem to come up with a different but comparable plot for all the cheating wife stories. In any case, I have enjoyed reading a number of your stories and enjoyed them.
There was never a doubt about his caliber as a writer. He is one of the best on this site. However, his themes hurt as more often than not his male characters are not that strong (and that's putting it mildly). In this case, the man is not a wimp. 5 star rating.
Throwing cliched meat to the cowardly lions ( & they think its caviar ) !
It's a ok read. JPB's talent shines thru here and there thru the whorey' stereotypes. It took me five minutes to read this and the author about twenty to write. I like BTB stories as much as the average man who's been lied to and more by a woman. This ,however, Is a classic ....unoriginal throwaway.
He did a good job getting his revenge right up until the end when he got stupid. He beat Ron up while his wife watched. After throwing his involvement in her troubles in her face, there's no doubt in my mind that Ron pressed assault charges, the wife testified on Ron's behalf and he went to jail, lost his job and everything else. In the end, he was an idiot.
JPB wrote a story "Ryan gets his wish" and didn't allow comments on that story. SO, I decided I'd comment on THAT story here. When Ryan asked his wife to cuckold him she went overboard and brought a black man into their bedroom. (Why is it always a big-dicked black man?). Then she made Ryan "clean her out" or the marriage was over and he was to leave. Why wouldn't he throw her out? She cheated, she has NO proof that he wanted her to and he has all the proof he needs in the black guy to file for a divorce using infidelity. So why would he leave? She's toast! Thanks for another wimp cuckold Bob! Good story - bad ending.
I liked it. Very satisfying... But, a better ending might have been to arrange to "bump into her" somewhere and chat amicably, all the while calling her Rina, her lovers' pet name for her, and giving her a knowing look. And as they chat, describing her sudden understanding of what had happened to them. No evidence, no criminal charges, only dawning and belated respect, and a growing awareness of her loss. I would have liked something like that better, since their lives were already trashed.
I find any kind of evidence there is still some justice in some places to be very encouraging. Some wordsmith masters just seem able to knock these things out. WOW I am envious.
Too often JPB makes his husbands weak cuckolds or if unwilling cuckolds don't have enough guts to get any revenge. It makes me feel better to read this story.
English
good story
Thanks for the entertainment. Mike from Texas
Another goOd one JPB
And with an ENDING! OMG WHAT'S HAPPENING!!! sorry dude couldn't resist. All the best from Montreal
Bob?
You actually wrote a story about a man with big balls. I loved it!
A tough husband!
Good one Bob. Nice to see a character that got some balls - and some revenge. Keep it up.
Another good story by JPB
Well written, and with suitable revenge. Please note, about 25% of JPB's
production are revenge stories, but all are well written!
WOW
Here is the JPB that we know and like to read!
Great story...Thank you!!!
Too bad it is a
riped off story. I have read almost the exact same story here on Lit.
JPB is just so unpredictable
Sometimes it's the elevator. Sometimes it's the shaft.
Pretty good one. Thanks for sharing.
Loved it
JPB - Absolutely one of your best. I have at times been critical, always in good fun of course, but this was a great story.
And a Happy St. Patrick's Day to JPB!
Made my day sofar.
Meat & Potatoes
Your stories are always "meat and potatoes." No overblown background or buildup needed. No unnecessary side-bars. Just wham-bam and kick ass. It usually works well. This time I think it worked. Revenge can be sweet.
Thank you for writing and sharing your stories.
Why do you stray?
This genre of loving wives stories is the best out there and make my day when I see them.
I don't understand all the other "like to watch" or "wimp" stories you or any others write. In any case this is a good one. I'd have liked to see a little more discussion at the end, her a little more emotionally hurt and shocked, maybe a little more buildup, but hey, great story!
Rob
Good story bob
Shooting yourself in the foot
He had gotten them all fired, tossed into jail, and divorced. So he needs to go beat the guys up and nothing happens to him? The two guys don't seek retribution and beat him up?? Then he has to brag about what he did to his ex? When no one knew he had been involved the cops wouldn't be checking his activities but now that the ex knows the cops could know and start checking. It's likely someone "he knows" would let something slip. He is so careful and calculating all the way through and then risks it all? Pretty stupid and he hasn't been a stupid man. The ending doesn't fit his character. Do an anonymous beat down on the guys and keep your mouth shut. Their lives have gone to shit, he can enjoy his little secret just like she enjoyed hers. Of course he could find ways to rub her face in her misery without giving himself away.
This is Bob!!
Doing what he do best!! (Good Read)
No finesse!
*
I like it
Good unexpected treachery and disrespect are met with a cerebral comeuppance... Bravo! With a bit of districts for good measure. I enjoy the cheating spouses reasoning for their betrayal, but I was still entertained nonetheless. Thanks for the real man story!
Yea Jason
bullshit
Awesome!!!
Not much more to say.
Wow, who wrote this?
Just Plain Bob? You're kidding, aren't you. He doesn't give the revenge angle like this, does he. Thank You, for expanding yourself to new possibilities.
Great read.
I very much enjoyed reading this story. Wish the revenge part was a bit more imaginative...nonetheless just plain fun!
No wimps in this story
Well done.
Quite the interesting and twisted story of slow premeditated revenge.
It may have taken him a little time but his reward was worth the effort.
Thanks for the good read.
Just Plain Bob ROCKS !!!
Loved the story and I also love all of your storys. Keep up the terriffic writing. Love your story lines and style.
Feel-good fantasy for us guys
This one is a definite, TTB (torch the bitch) tale that hits all the right buttons and satisfies the revenge crowd, including me. Too bad one couldn't get away with something like this. A better angle might have been to also plant some kiddie porn on Mark and his buddy. The cops might have then charged them with something along those lines, and guess what happens to child pornographers (and child rapists) in prison?
JPB left out the part about suing the company and board of directors for their failure to enforce morals, etc. etc. Oh, I know it is none of the executives' business what employees do on their own time, but given the info near the beginning of the story, it is clear many if not most of the employees at the party knew what Sabrina and her friends were up to. So the company can be held responsible, at least by a creative lawyer..
Burn Baby Burn!! or something like that......
JPB,
No he wasn't a wimp, just disappointed. Glad you did not make him out to be over the top. Just simple calculated angry response. Just enough irony, conflict and character development too. Enjoyed it as much as you did writing it.
Thanks for sharing on Lit.
x
HELLO!
Loved the way he took Matters into his own hands and let the Three Cheaters suffer a LifeTime of Pain and Regret.
Good Writing JPB.
Read and awful lot like . . .
Black & Tan Blues by ItMgr. Great for short fantasy read, but not nearly as in depth or, thus, as believable as Black & Tan.
And while I really like your stories--and dutifully and with glee read all of them--you have clearly demonstrated the ability to write longer, more in depth stories.
So please make an old fan happy: Give us another longer one with better characterization.
You'all missing the BIG picture
The ONLY reason WHY this author JPB writes a story like this... with a real plot... good characters... good consistenncy and based on semi- realisitic situation is that.... he wants to keep YOU guessing.
You see JPB really does NOT like writing stories like this. MOST of his stuff revolves idiot husbands... sexual deviants... cream pies.. and brain dead hetrosexual men. Therefore one can infer that JPB likes THOSE kind of stories and NOT this kind.
This story PROVES he can do better but MOST of his stories are NOT like this one. Hhence the large number of readers who are stunned by this one. But that raises a bigegr question: WHY does JPB every so often ...write a good story?
To keep YOU the reader guessing and reading.
The biggest MYTH at LIT is that JPB only writes for himself and he doesnt really care all that Much about what the reader thinks.
600+ stories and he only writes for himself?
yeah....
Good one
Stuff like this happens every day. I don't know why some people think it isn't so. I have read comments before that say anyone who does something like that will spend some time at the Hilton. It ain't so. A third of the rapes are unsolved in my state. I'll bet there are a few unsolved disappearances too. The actions described here are everyday life for some, and believe me, most of them are not caught. There are people who do not call the cops or a lawyer when things go wrong. When someone is threatened correctly, they will feel threatened. People get away with breaking the law more than not. Everyday. But, thinking otherwise makes people feel safer doesn't it?
According to the story...
...he sent her flowers and candy on the anniversary of the first time they had anal sex. ("First time" hints that there was a second, third, etc.)
And then he uses anal sex to get her pissed off at him so that she won't talk to him for a week, let alone have sex with him?
Can we say, "ERROR"?
enjoyed the story
You always seem to come up with a different but comparable plot for all the cheating wife stories. In any case, I have enjoyed reading a number of your stories and enjoyed them.
shame it a repeat of an early work nothing orgianl.. shame
hi nice story the first time and good story the second.
even so it's still a repeat.
part from that.
it's exactly the sort of story i like to read from you.
the guy get his revenge and dont get caught in the process.
I did like a lot of this story...
but hated the cheap way it ended. One would think that the author of 600+ stories would do better. Maybe Harry is right.
I liked this.
I always enjoy tales of revenge on cheating sluts.
jasonnh is right.
Assult and battery and telling everyone is out of character. He would be sent to prison. Therefore the ending is not logical.
Because of the stupid ending I gave it a 1* instead of 5*****s.
Nice job JPB
you either like him or you hate and I like this one
Great
Cheating slut wife gets caught with lovers and bustd for drugs.
Film at 11.
HA HA
loved it.
There was never a doubt about his caliber as a writer. He is one of the best on this site. However, his themes hurt as more often than not his male characters are not that strong (and that's putting it mildly). In this case, the man is not a wimp. 5 star rating.
WHY ARE CHEATERS SO SUPRISED WHEN THE SHIT HITS THE FAN
especially when they cant see or dont know it can come unexpectedly. TK U MLJ LV NV
Throwing cliched meat to the cowardly lions ( & they think its caviar ) !
It's a ok read. JPB's talent shines thru here and there thru the whorey' stereotypes. It took me five minutes to read this and the author about twenty to write. I like BTB stories as much as the average man who's been lied to and more by a woman. This ,however, Is a classic ....unoriginal throwaway.
I think the revenge was just about right.
He could have planted more drugs after they got out, a second offense sentence would have been longer.
An interesting tale with a harsh revenge. Can't blame the guy.
Excellent
Re-read this. Harsh revenge is just what was needed against these vile cheaters. Fuck 'um.
Nice revenge plan - almost
He did a good job getting his revenge right up until the end when he got stupid. He beat Ron up while his wife watched. After throwing his involvement in her troubles in her face, there's no doubt in my mind that Ron pressed assault charges, the wife testified on Ron's behalf and he went to jail, lost his job and everything else. In the end, he was an idiot.
This is an "end run"
JPB wrote a story "Ryan gets his wish" and didn't allow comments on that story. SO, I decided I'd comment on THAT story here. When Ryan asked his wife to cuckold him she went overboard and brought a black man into their bedroom. (Why is it always a big-dicked black man?). Then she made Ryan "clean her out" or the marriage was over and he was to leave. Why wouldn't he throw her out? She cheated, she has NO proof that he wanted her to and he has all the proof he needs in the black guy to file for a divorce using infidelity. So why would he leave? She's toast! Thanks for another wimp cuckold Bob! Good story - bad ending.
WHEN YOU TRASH TALK
be sure you can back it up when necessary. Talk it and walk it, TK U MLJ LV NV
Too Bad
Too bad he gave her evidence and a reason to press charges at the end.
More satisfying ending?
I liked it. Very satisfying... But, a better ending might have been to arrange to "bump into her" somewhere and chat amicably, all the while calling her Rina, her lovers' pet name for her, and giving her a knowing look. And as they chat, describing her sudden understanding of what had happened to them. No evidence, no criminal charges, only dawning and belated respect, and a growing awareness of her loss. I would have liked something like that better, since their lives were already trashed.
But as I said, satisfying story.
Hooray.............
I find any kind of evidence there is still some justice in some places to be very encouraging. Some wordsmith masters just seem able to knock these things out. WOW I am envious.
I have read this before and really enjoyed it.
Too often JPB makes his husbands weak cuckolds or if unwilling cuckolds don't have enough guts to get any revenge. It makes me feel better to read this story.
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