All Comments on 'What Have I Done: The Morning After'

lol funny ending

continue this!!! preferably with reluctance of the daughter and the mom not accepting of it but lets it continue

Love the story and so happy to see that you decided to finish this! You have to continue, please! I will do ANYTHING to find out what happens next!

This piece was good but i liked the first part better. I was hoping a little more sneaking around and almost getting caught before the actual catching. She was suppose to be getting her own room. It was good for what it was and I enjoyed it some. But it could have been alot better Sorry

That was good now to make it hotter have the wife to join in this now to maybe the wife and daughter can do a 69 for you next have the wife to turn out to be bi

been waiting for u to continue and u were amazing....

may be u should get the mom to be forced by the son and his friend...

have an orgy!

I am so glad I wrote that email to you to continue this and thanks for continuing it. I do sincerely appreciate it and your work. I must say I liked the first part better and the build up and reluctance to it. It added alot to the story. This was also well done and I ask that you go on with more. I would not get the mom and son (that's a different theme altogether) involved and would follow the suggestion of one comment that the mom not be accepting of it. Then the daughter can be reluctance and pull back some but her inner feeling want daddys cock. The dad would then continue to worship the beautiful goddess she is. Thanks again and keep it going!!!

~Flyguy

More please.............

yoo when should we look for the next one ???

u definitely need to add another chapter. mom has got to be fucked as well

Just..........WOW!

Leave it right here! I truly enjoyed this as one of my favorites. I love cliff hangers!

This is by far the best series on the site. Please continue it!

~Flyguy

Great story...I hope we get a chance to read what come's next...

Fantastic job! This story is too nice to end right now. This is a suggestion for a way forward. All dad needs to do is let mom think that it was an honest mistake and that (he) dad thought he was banging mom until she stepped out of the bathroom and that he was as equally horrified. The daughter should also lie that she thought it was Tom. Let the daughter get her own room and Tom sent home. Once this scenerio has been created, they should continue with their vacationing. We can then be given another opportunity to read something in the lines of what someone suggested: that the daughter should show continous reluctance while also succumbing to dad's manipulations.

Hurry and write some more. I would like to know what happens after that. Does the wife go nuts andkill them. Does she get turned on and join in. Or is she like some mothers and make them fuck until they are so exhausted? You know like the parent that catches them smoking and makes them smoke a whole carton of smokes. PLEASSSE!

Please finish this. How about if the mother fucks the son in revenge?

Write more, please!!!! Wonderful story.

To put it eloquently: "The Shit Hit the Fan". I bet the mom thought "What the fuck?", the dad thought "Holy Shit!", and the daughter thought "Uh oh".

Fantastic story! I enjoyed reading both parts and cannot wait till the next one!

I love both installments, great work! Now you have us all waiting like baby birds for you to finish chewing before you feed us more. You could go in so many directions with the next installment but im not the type to push you one way or the other, i just cant wait to read where you take this story next. Keep up the good writing. -Bionic

Hmm tht was an opportunity for a 3 some. love it a lot.

Over two years at my writing and no continuation??????

sadly this story has not been continued. betting anything the daughter would of wound up pregos.

This story was so freaking Hot! I always come back to it...always! I really hope and wish you will continue this story another chapter.

I actually do NOT want a threesome with the Mom. The idea of the Dad still rocking it with his Daughter behind his wife's back is so taboo and erotic...turn on! The sneaking around and even putting themselves in challenging situations, just like having sex next to his wife...so naughty and thrilling...the possibility of getting caught ;) just makes it way more exciting and steamy!

Hope to see more of Daddy and Daughter (only) action in soon!

I 100% love this story!

I can't say how many times I have read this and re-read from memory.

This story is one of the best on this site and one to always go back to If you wanna get horny quick!

I'm still curious to why you didn't sneak around before the actual time of your wife catching you two.

Pleasssse!! Right more!!

BEFORE THE WORLD ENDS. END IT NOW. PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD END THIS TABOO! ENCORE! ENCORE!

It appears that Mom killed Dad "the author" since we haven't seen anything

Hmmm; as alternatives;

dad continues and says "it's about time you got out here, she's ready for you now"

mom sighs, looking at Gabby saying "my; what a lovely mess that you've gotten us into" as she dives in for breakfast, etc...

mom says "thank god; didn't know how to tell you about our son / my dad / my brother"! BTW; shows him the strip in her hand that shows she's preggie, hee-hee

dad yells "WTF; I thought Gabby was in the shower!!" yeah right 8~P

mom opens the adjoining door to invite the boys over and a) seeing them already engaged "Ewwww" and quietly shuts door, or b) yells "come n get it"

Thanks;

DKP

Ooh dis man is sooo dead.....................

.... (In my head) and it's still not remotely believable.

I'd be interested in reading a third installment to see what you do with this sorry !

I absolutely love this story!

Just the thought of daddy fucking his little girl hard while mom is only about ten feet away in the shower makes me shiver.

Every time I read this story I have to touch myself, mostly because I love that she's reluctant at first and then proceeds to practically beg her father for his incestuous come inside her womb. Then I completely lose it when daddy locks eyes with mommy and come right as he's "expelling the longest and best ejaculation of [his] life into [their] child". And suddenly I'm picturing her belly getting big with her own sibling/child and coming even harder than I thought possible.

Please, please, please continue this story and write a final chapter on their sexual escapades!

Absolutely amazing maybe the bro and mum could you know have been having a thing...........

....... SOMETHING ELSE. FIRST OF, IT TOOK A COUPLE OF YEARS BEFORE HE CAME OUT WITH A LAME SHORT CHAPTER THAT'S UNFINISHED. THESE ARE THE TIMES I WISH LITEROTICA HAVE QUALITY CONTROL EMPLOYEES TO PATROL LOW UNPASSABLE STORIES NOT TO BE ABLE TO POST HERE.

Seriously loved the first and second chapter to this story, I just can't believe you stopped there. This story as good as it is has so much more to offer with more chapters!

I really doubt this happened in real life and the idea that a father could do this to his own daughter is ludicrous but Phew! Appreciations should be given where appreciations are due.

The story is well written and really interesting and smoking H-O-T !!!

keep the daughter reluctant and hesitating and the dad loves her.

make them finish before mom comes back. Secret sex is best

You should make another chapter where the mom is yelling at them and kicks dad out but later kick the daughter out and father daughter are living together and they have sex all the time

I have cum so many times to this story.... Love the part where he creams in her even though he's just been caught. It's SO HOT that he's too far gone to stop and just shoots his load... I also wish there were more chapters. Who knows where you could take this, but you're a super dirty, really good writer -- I trust you could come up with something hot & raunchy!

I laughed at one of the comments below 'a father wouldnt do this to his daughter in real life.' Rofl! Um, yeah some would. Ive met thousands and thousands of people through work, seeing them in their home life, and I assure you there are ALL kinds out there. This wouldnt even be a stetch. Sometimes the father/daughter thing is so obvious you're thinking 'really?! Turn it down a few notches!!'

Love how the father just kept going! Hell, you're already caught so might as well get the extra kink out of it and have the orgasm of a lifetime! Then get your story straight with the daughter so if the wife divorces you over it y'all cant get fucked over it! Lol.

You should make more chapters this was really good

Please let her have his child. Tender molesting is my favourite theme.

What is the problem with you people Incest & Rape ! Clear your frigging minds ! zee.

Just kill yourself

First of all I think this was a great piece of writing and regardless of what you think this comment bar is not a place you go to be rude to tell someone to kill themselves over something they wrote let alone the fact that by saying it makes you hypocritical seeing as you probably have some fantasies of your own. You should be ashamed of yourself not only for posting the comment but doing it behind an anonymous so no one knows who it is. However if I were a hypocritical bastard or bitch I wouldn't want people to know my name either so kudos to you for cowering behind a mask. With that being said your an asshole. Now back to the writing bingabangaloo I thought your writing was superb and I am sorry you were given such a horrible comment. Might I suggest that in later chapters of this you bring in the son and his friend. I also want to say I am really proud of you and other literotica authors for putting yourselves out there and sharing such an intimate piece of yourselves with the world.

Gr8 read tho

I agree twas an amazing piece, please countinue. And i agree to the guy that wrote jerk if you two found this then that means you were looking for incest in the first plase, therefore you are a hypocrite and what are you a teenagaer going on porn sites telling people to kill themselves thats ridiculous. Bingbangaloo cointinue your an amazing write :)

Part 3 please?!!

This got me so hard. Almost as good as the first one... Probably my third time readin' this.

should have the mom be totally disgusted in the next chapter but later have her feeling all hot and bothered by it that she joins in on the next session.(fyi I'm just advising this as a chapter and NOT real life shit)

You have got to get mum shagging the son and his friend and then turn it into a real sex orgy and have mum and daughter take on all the three of you boys

That was amazing! part 3 please

Great story , hoping that you continue, 3 cocks 2 cunts.

What kind of post-medieval, steam-driven world do you live in? Have you never heard of Photoshop? The reason the republicassholes don't go plastering those pictures everywhere is that they're smarter than you; they at least know a fake when they see it; look further and you'll find pictures of your darling Donald Dump with a baboon's butt grafted onto his head, are you going to believe those are real too? According to your reasoning, they must be, they're on the Internet...

Grow the fuck up, you inbred Okie retard and yank your head out of your ass before your own shit suffocates you.

Omg the wig should totally be disgusted and end up doing it with the son and his friend.

Fuck yes Daddy, knock up your baby girl while mommy watches

next mom joins in maybe

Oh dear lord please keep going !

Will you be adding a 3rd chapter

There is still room for more cum in her pussy.... give it to her....she is no doubt cumming on his dick.... more !!!!!!!

Let her mom suck your cum from her pussy

Please add another chapter!!

I hope you will continue this story because it is hot and great.

Please make a chapter 3 I wanna know what’s gonna happen. You should make the dad and the brothers friend have a threesome

This is such a good selection for my "spank" bank . I cum at least 5 times to this

Need to have chapter 3,4 & 5!!!

Mother joins in. Brother's friend and father on daughter. Brother on Mother. Brother on Sister. Father and Tom on Mother. Come on.... Love it.

I too would love extra chapters but don’t go all crazy and write some shitty orgy the (somewhat) realism is what made this great, her initial reluctance and slipping into acceptance gradually helped build this story up

Don’t add mom to their loving. Just daddy and his sexy daughter continuing to make him lose control.

Please do an ending to this story. Don't add the mother

for a threesome etc. I've read all your stories and they

are good..Just overlook the ugly or mean comments,

they not writing stories, they're just criticizing someone

else's work and they're not writing one story. So I tell

those type of people write and upload your story and lets

us criticize them. They surely would be complaining

about what is written and done to them..

That was short and sweet but I liked it. It was not the kind of ending I was expecting but that's the hook you get when your interested enough. It's about unpredictability. An important ingredient in a story. It keeps you reading to the end. Nice work. Thank you.

I laughed at how horrible the situation at the end of chapter 2 was so I think that was a fine ending if you leave it there. But I hope for a part 3. Enjoyed the rest for all the "right" reasons.

There's nothing better than having your father's cock inside of you spurting his seman deep inside of you. My daddy fucked me in a hotel room that we were sharing while attending a wedding out of town. Like gabby I tried to stop him, but he was persistent and wore me down by rubbing his cock against my slit until I was so wet and moist that he was able to push his cock inside of me. Like gabby I hoped that he wouldn't cum inside of me, but he did. I wasn't on birth control and I was ovulating, although I didn't know that I was. His potent seman covered my overies and one of his little sperm cells found the egg that was in my uterus and I got pregnant

I was barely 18 years old and still in high school and pregnant with my daddy's baby inside of me. When my mother found out ,she was furious and walked out on us. That left daddy and I to have sex whenever we wanted to. I moved into his bedroom and we slept together every night..He told me that he loved me and I guess that I loved him because we are still together and have a one year old baby girl and another one on the way

This is such a good story. Dont add the mom, make her confess that she fucked their son and Tom lmao

After re reading this story it reminded me about that night when my daddy seduced me. The part of this story that reminded me was what happened in the morning after gabby and her father woke up. Gabbies resistance from her daddy's persistence to seduce her again were worn down rather quickly and she became receptive to his advances, letting him touch her thigh high up near her pussy without trying to stop him, although she did try moving away from him in the beginning. But when she turned her head around to look at him and let him kiss her, it was the same as telling him that she wanted him to fuck her, which he did.

I did something similar with my daddy. After he had seduced me and ejaculated inside of me, it was me that innchated the second time he had sex with me.

There was absolutely no resistance on my part of trying to stop him from fucking me. In fact I wanted him to fuck me again and cum inside of me. I reasoned that since he had ejaculated inside of me the first time, why would I not want him to repeat doing it again?.There was no reason I told myself. I remember that I moved my pussy so it was touching his hard stiff cock and pushed my pussy against it until it was going inside of me, filling me up with his cock until it was buried deep inside of me,touching the back of my vagina making me coo and moan telling him how good it feels and telling him to cum inside of me. This was so much like what gabby had done to her daddy and although the story didn't mention it, she probably was so excited about what they were doing, that getting pregnant was the farthest thing on her mind

I know that it is just a story but I like to think that gabby got pregnant like I did and had a baby with her daddy

It's sooo hot and exciting knowing the cock that your DNA had came out of and that's why you are here is now spurting the same DNA inside of you trying to get you pregnant

I sometimes wonder about how many girls have been fucked by their daddies?

Quite a few I can imagine

Could u please add a part where they all have a 3-some? Just a request not a must.

Definitely need another chapter

Stories with a certain realism is more mind controlling! Will the mother questioned the moral issue or not ? Let see. Love this story

Don't add the mom PLEASE.

Just the father and the daughter it's amazing but it's your story so you can whatever you want. I'll still keep reading it

Daddy wakes up and sees proof of what he did to daughter during the night, and is remorseful.

He gets a hard-on. No more remorse.

He then proceeds to fuck daughter again, and wife catches him in the act.

He's still a prick, asshole and rapist.

Hope wifey cuts his cock off.

Hardly a suitable end to the (previous) start of this story.

Happiness short lived

Can't wait to see what happens next! Will Mama spank her ass, Eat Daddy's cum out of her, suck the cum off his cock, then watch Daddy Fuck her again?!! Yum!!

Write more!

Damn, cliffhangers!!!! But kinda short... Could of had the mothers reaction in this... Also, this is only the second day of the hotel & still have 2 weeks worth of fun to have... Really sucks that there wasnt more to this... Started of really well... Like was Tom really friends with the brother or was he really the daughters boyfriend??? Did they send Tom home & then the Mother decides to seduce her son, while father & daughter continue to bond... So many questions & no answers for them...

Hot story. Perfect ending. Leaves everyone anxious to know the outcome. Imaginative responses from others proves that.

I too felt like I was left hanging from a tree. Moms feelings could have been explained. Maybe a mom and son having a session on sex. Daughters thoughts before the night with dad to the finish of her and dad fucking. So much more can be written on the subjects left on the table.

How about in the morning, Gabbies pussy smelling like stale seman would make any male want to fuck her again. There's nothing like smelling the aftermath of a night of fucking, that aroumac smell of pussy is overwhelming and a powerful aprodegact.Waking up next to a tight young cunt and knowing that you can fuck her again

I can't blame her daddy from fucking her and coming inside of her

Remember the old saying

A stiff cock has no councious and a hot pussy has no fear. This is so true in this story

You sir are amazing! Best thing I've read in a while!

PERFECTION!!!!!!!

Dad’s excuse, he was asleep and thought that tight pussy was his wife.

The daughter thought she was dreaming about getting ploughing.

After the shock of it all the mom buys it then consoles her daughter in the shower. Mom begins to wash her husband’s spunk from her daughters puffy pussy.

The following night dad has to sleep with the guys. This could go anywhere!

Mom and daughter sleep together and begin talking and petting which leads to 71. ( it’s 69 with 2 fingers somewhere else).

Great story

I NEED ANOTHER PART

I need a part 2 WITHOUT having the mom having sex with them too😑. I hate when writers involve other people, I don’t like sharing :)

Can't wait to read what happens next. You left it on a cliff hanger!!!

omg yes

Where is the next part wtf

Gave both stories 5 stars, uhh but we need more ASAP

always love to read tales of people getting caught cheating and how the situation is resolved,,,enjoying this story,,well written and all that!

A perfect sequel, thank you!!!!!

You are a gifted writer ... it is a shame that you quit submitting tales.