What Have I Done: The Morning After

good story

lol funny ending

hot

continue this!!! preferably with reluctance of the daughter and the mom not accepting of it but lets it continue

Finish this please!

Love the story and so happy to see that you decided to finish this! You have to continue, please! I will do ANYTHING to find out what happens next!

Was Hoping!

This piece was good but i liked the first part better. I was hoping a little more sneaking around and almost getting caught before the actual catching. She was suppose to be getting her own room. It was good for what it was and I enjoyed it some. But it could have been alot better Sorry

THAT WAS GOOD

That was good now to make it hotter have the wife to join in this now to maybe the wife and daughter can do a 69 for you next have the wife to turn out to be bi

wow

been waiting for u to continue and u were amazing....
may be u should get the mom to be forced by the son and his friend...
have an orgy!

Very good. Thanks for continuing!!! Please more!!!

I am so glad I wrote that email to you to continue this and thanks for continuing it. I do sincerely appreciate it and your work. I must say I liked the first part better and the build up and reluctance to it. It added alot to the story. This was also well done and I ask that you go on with more. I would not get the mom and son (that's a different theme altogether) involved and would follow the suggestion of one comment that the mom not be accepting of it. Then the daughter can be reluctance and pull back some but her inner feeling want daddys cock. The dad would then continue to worship the beautiful goddess she is. Thanks again and keep it going!!!

~Flyguy

:)

More please.............

next one

yoo when should we look for the next one ???

MMMMMMMM

u definitely need to add another chapter. mom has got to be fucked as well

Wow!

Just..........WOW!

Awesome! But...

Leave it right here! I truly enjoyed this as one of my favorites. I love cliff hangers!

Please please continue it again!!

This is by far the best series on the site. Please continue it!

~Flyguy

Cool

Great story...I hope we get a chance to read what come's next...

Way forward

Fantastic job! This story is too nice to end right now. This is a suggestion for a way forward. All dad needs to do is let mom think that it was an honest mistake and that (he) dad thought he was banging mom until she stepped out of the bathroom and that he was as equally horrified. The daughter should also lie that she thought it was Tom. Let the daughter get her own room and Tom sent home. Once this scenerio has been created, they should continue with their vacationing. We can then be given another opportunity to read something in the lines of what someone suggested: that the daughter should show continous reluctance while also succumbing to dad's manipulations.

Hurry!

Hurry and write some more. I would like to know what happens after that. Does the wife go nuts andkill them. Does she get turned on and join in. Or is she like some mothers and make them fuck until they are so exhausted? You know like the parent that catches them smoking and makes them smoke a whole carton of smokes. PLEASSSE!

more please

Please finish this. How about if the mother fucks the son in revenge?

Please, please more

Write more, please!!!! Wonderful story.

Perfect "Fuck-Up" ending

To put it eloquently: "The Shit Hit the Fan". I bet the mom thought "What the fuck?", the dad thought "Holy Shit!", and the daughter thought "Uh oh".

Waiting for the next chapter

Fantastic story! I enjoyed reading both parts and cannot wait till the next one!

More please ...

I love both installments, great work! Now you have us all waiting like baby birds for you to finish chewing before you feed us more. You could go in so many directions with the next installment but im not the type to push you one way or the other, i just cant wait to read where you take this story next. Keep up the good writing. -Bionic

sweet baby cunt

Hmm tht was an opportunity for a 3 some. love it a lot.

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Over two years at my writing and no continuation??????

no part 3?

sadly this story has not been continued. betting anything the daughter would of wound up pregos.

More please...

This story was so freaking Hot! I always come back to it...always! I really hope and wish you will continue this story another chapter.

I actually do NOT want a threesome with the Mom. The idea of the Dad still rocking it with his Daughter behind his wife's back is so taboo and erotic...turn on! The sneaking around and even putting themselves in challenging situations, just like having sex next to his wife...so naughty and thrilling...the possibility of getting caught ;) just makes it way more exciting and steamy!

Hope to see more of Daddy and Daughter (only) action in soon!

Love it!

I 100% love this story!
I can't say how many times I have read this and re-read from memory.
This story is one of the best on this site and one to always go back to If you wanna get horny quick!

great story! you should continue it.

I'm still curious to why you didn't sneak around before the actual time of your wife catching you two.
Pleasssse!! Right more!!

END THIS STORY.

BEFORE THE WORLD ENDS. END IT NOW. PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD END THIS TABOO! ENCORE! ENCORE!

Oh so friggn hot and what a cliffhanger

It appears that Mom killed Dad "the author" since we haven't seen anything

Hmmm; as alternatives;

dad continues and says "it's about time you got out here, she's ready for you now"

mom sighs, looking at Gabby saying "my; what a lovely mess that you've gotten us into" as she dives in for breakfast, etc...

mom says "thank god; didn't know how to tell you about our son / my dad / my brother"! BTW; shows him the strip in her hand that shows she's preggie, hee-hee

dad yells "WTF; I thought Gabby was in the shower!!" yeah right 8~P

mom opens the adjoining door to invite the boys over and a) seeing them already engaged "Ewwww" and quietly shuts door, or b) yells "come n get it"

Thanks;
DKP

Ooh dis man is sooo dead.....................

There's only one thing they can say...

.... (In my head) and it's still not remotely believable.

I'd be interested in reading a third installment to see what you do with this sorry !

I absolutely love this story!

Just the thought of daddy fucking his little girl hard while mom is only about ten feet away in the shower makes me shiver.

Every time I read this story I have to touch myself, mostly because I love that she's reluctant at first and then proceeds to practically beg her father for his incestuous come inside her womb. Then I completely lose it when daddy locks eyes with mommy and come right as he's "expelling the longest and best ejaculation of [his] life into [their] child". And suddenly I'm picturing her belly getting big with her own sibling/child and coming even harder than I thought possible.

Please, please, please continue this story and write a final chapter on their sexual escapades!

Fuck

Absolutely amazing maybe the bro and mum could you know have been having a thing...........

THIS AUTHOR IS.......

....... SOMETHING ELSE. FIRST OF, IT TOOK A COUPLE OF YEARS BEFORE HE CAME OUT WITH A LAME SHORT CHAPTER THAT'S UNFINISHED. THESE ARE THE TIMES I WISH LITEROTICA HAVE QUALITY CONTROL EMPLOYEES TO PATROL LOW UNPASSABLE STORIES NOT TO BE ABLE TO POST HERE.

Loved it..

Seriously loved the first and second chapter to this story, I just can't believe you stopped there. This story as good as it is has so much more to offer with more chapters!

Unbelievable but so damn hot

I really doubt this happened in real life and the idea that a father could do this to his own daughter is ludicrous but Phew! Appreciations should be given where appreciations are due.

The story is well written and really interesting and smoking H-O-T !!!

good

keep the daughter reluctant and hesitating and the dad loves her.

mom not knowing

make them finish before mom comes back. Secret sex is best

Mom

You should make another chapter where the mom is yelling at them and kicks dad out but later kick the daughter out and father daughter are living together and they have sex all the time

Lovvvvve this story....

I have cum so many times to this story.... Love the part where he creams in her even though he's just been caught. It's SO HOT that he's too far gone to stop and just shoots his load... I also wish there were more chapters. Who knows where you could take this, but you're a super dirty, really good writer -- I trust you could come up with something hot & raunchy!

I laughed at one of the comments below 'a father wouldnt do this to his daughter in real life.' Rofl! Um, yeah some would. Ive met thousands and thousands of people through work, seeing them in their home life, and I assure you there are ALL kinds out there. This wouldnt even be a stetch. Sometimes the father/daughter thing is so obvious you're thinking 'really?! Turn it down a few notches!!'

Love how the father just kept going! Hell, you're already caught so might as well get the extra kink out of it and have the orgasm of a lifetime! Then get your story straight with the daughter so if the wife divorces you over it y'all cant get fucked over it! Lol.

Wow

You should make more chapters this was really good

Please let her have his child. Tender molesting is my favourite theme.

Sounds Like Rape to Me !

What is the problem with you people Incest & Rape ! Clear your frigging minds ! zee.

Kill yourself faggot

Just kill yourself

jerk

First of all I think this was a great piece of writing and regardless of what you think this comment bar is not a place you go to be rude to tell someone to kill themselves over something they wrote let alone the fact that by saying it makes you hypocritical seeing as you probably have some fantasies of your own. You should be ashamed of yourself not only for posting the comment but doing it behind an anonymous so no one knows who it is. However if I were a hypocritical bastard or bitch I wouldn't want people to know my name either so kudos to you for cowering behind a mask. With that being said your an asshole. Now back to the writing bingabangaloo I thought your writing was superb and I am sorry you were given such a horrible comment. Might I suggest that in later chapters of this you bring in the son and his friend. I also want to say I am really proud of you and other literotica authors for putting yourselves out there and sharing such an intimate piece of yourselves with the world.

outb4 humiliation

Gr8 read tho

Amazed

I agree twas an amazing piece, please countinue. And i agree to the guy that wrote jerk if you two found this then that means you were looking for incest in the first plase, therefore you are a hypocrite and what are you a teenagaer going on porn sites telling people to kill themselves thats ridiculous. Bingbangaloo cointinue your an amazing write :)

Omg

Part 3 please?!!

This got me so hard. Almost as good as the first one... Probably my third time readin' this.