Aurora

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5, probably a good thing I saw the thread, si I know where you're coming from. As a Rimbaud emulation (not imitation) I think it is very good. I've always had problems with Rimbaud.

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enjoyed the language and the transformation of the interpretation of aurora. Parts were more prosey than I generally prefer, but who knows, a story poem is probably the best way to tell this one. 5

I enjoyed this a lot, not sure it was consciously Rimbaudesque but if so, all the better iin my opinion.

I give it a 5. If it was me I'd try to compress it but that might alter its style.

Good work! Thanks.

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Brilliant imagery but the format bugs me. It strikes me more like very poetic flash fiction rather than a poem but it is so beautiful on the ear.

Loved this one

I love how the scenes play out in my imagination. As if going scene by scene in a film. Plus, the underlying erotic tones...oo laa la.