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Wow.
Really good concept, a little weak on the sex though. Still, I liked it as a story.
Couldn't rate it on the standard star scale
VERY well written. Not in the least erotic, and altogether disturbing. I APPRECIATED this story very much, but I'm not sure I LIKED it much. Well done, I think.
Exceptional, enchanting, and highly erotic
Well, I think this is exceptionally well-written AND very erotic as well!!
I'm sorry to disagree with Anonymouses (who are being respectfully polite and honest), but there's nothing disturbingly unpleasant here. It's an enchanting, fairy-tale like story of obsession, humorous and unexpected and, in an off-hand way, a tribute to the power of art.
I thought the sex was plentifully erotic and, by the standards of Higher Erotica, plentiful in itself. I know here on literotica I and most writers tend to indulge the play-by-play to fabulous lengths, but the details of the cunnilingus, anilingus, strap-on sex and fetishism here are hardly any more minimalistic than what you'd expect in a Susie Bright anthology or the pages of Anais Nin, Anne Rice, or other Higher Art writers of erotica.
And I strongly feel that this writer is, quite seriously, functioning at that exalted level.
I just love this story!! Jukebox is a tremendous talent.
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