Quarterback Sneak Ch. 05

Way too short.

Post more often, please. Love the story, so far.

Love it!!!

I love all your stories...I can't wait for the next chapter! Please keep them coming!!?!

Loving It

I love this story because it shows that even the heavier girls can get the hot guy. Can't wait for the next chapter. What will the bratty rommate do?

:(

is that it!!! don't make me wait too long for the next chapter

....GALYNN IS HOT HOT and READY !!

....good writing developing Galynn's growing sexual appetite...Galynn looked online and finds the loation of the NFL NAACP conference and gets a job at it's location...she is the beach bar's erotic masseuse at the Hilton's nude resort in Cancun and is on the internet 24/7.. she has 18 half hour booked "sessions" per day with the massive NFL studs !! the resort has to build bleachers for the loud drunk audiences .what fun..go for it !! thanks

I hope this wasn't the end of the story.

The last couple graphs sound final. If it is the end, just wanted to say I really enjoyed it. As a curvy black woman, I always appreciate when the "big" girl gets the guy. I know it's just fiction, but I hope they last. :o)

please continue this great story

*****

Editor or not, it's a sweet story, and hard not to like.

Five.

Good... I Want More!!

Awe such a short installment. It's sad. Can't wait to see more. Too long girl.

No...say it ain't so!!

PLEASE do not let this be the end of this story...noooo...say it isn't so!!!! This story is wonderful and I've been waiting on the next installment, please continue!!

Please......

It is imperative that you finish this story it is sooooo goooood!!!!!!

Awesome you are so talented i love the curvey girl getting the big man on campus

me too!!!

Still just loving the 'nowhere' girl getting the 'big' man - it's subverting these stupid crappy stereotypes and just makes you want to jump up tall and shout YAY!!!

Equally the 'popular' girl realising that the 'lone nerdy dweeb' is actually an interesting attractive person floats my boat too.

Because is it really as simple as the 'popular' getting together and the 'nobodies' doing the same?

Sometimes yes, but these new differences are increasingly becoming stereotypes in their own rights - differences between people attracted to each other for something other than their similar attributes. But then, maybe that's the next step to true heterogeneity. When none of this really matters at all .... That would be cool...

Take care:)

PS sorry - serious...!

Love love love

Ive been ready your stories for a long time and I absolutely love distractions!! Sorry I just had to say that!! But this story is amazing!! Please pleAse please tell me that this isn't the last chapter pu-lease!!!!
And please keep writing because you're amazing at it and you have the most realistic stories than most stories I've ready!! Simply your writing is amazing!!!

i love this series, please don't end it here. This cannot be the end of their story. I get butterflies every time I get close to the end of a page in fear that it will be the last of it. Please continue!

I'll be your editor!!!!!

If that means I can get sneak peeks of Quarterback Sneak I'd do almost anything (that involved reading your stories...)

:)

Another Great Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks for the update it was awesome!!! I am anxiously anticipating the next one!!!!!!!

SB

Great Job! Aleco and Galynn have steamy chemistry together.

AMAZING ......

wow i love it .... he's proving his love for and not caring what people think

Great Job!! Post more soon :)

WOW, this chapter was fun and exciting. I really love that Alceo is about what his heart wants than his rep. Galynn needs to stand up and keep her nose in the air to haters. I can't wait for more Alceo and Galynn lovin ;)

AMAZING!!!!

Sigh, if only this could happen in real life lol.

yes!!!

I love it , i love , i love it I do!!!
great job

Love this story...

I really do! But I wish you would finish Distractions.

Ooooooooooh!

I smell trouble ahead!!!!

Thanks

That was a great update and I'm so happy that Alceo let those girls know that he was and wanted to be with Gaylnn just hope that things continue to work out for them looking forward to see what happens next thanks!!

Oh Yeah

Trouble is indeed ahead I think so too and the bitch's name is Jasmine...

love it

I love. Your story but I have determined that only writing. One. Page is just Pure torture for your readers keep up the excellent work

go claim your man!!

This is such a cute story and I'm so glad that Galynn found her courage to claim her man. Now that their relationship was announced in public I hope that Galynn can put her insecurities aside.

Great work.
*****

OH SNAP!

I STUMBLED UPON THIS STORY CHECKING FOR A DISTRACTIONS UPDATE. I'M HOOKED! I CAN'T WAIT TILL THE NEXT INSTALMEN. (PS: JASMINE IS TOTALLY GONNA TRY SOMETHING...)

Awesome

That was a really great story it was so cute sweet and sexy. Thanks and I am really hoping that there will either be more from these two or another story similar to it

Next

Goodness when the next one coming... =) Like this storyline between the characters. Dang first you pump out chapters like 2 weeks in between and now more than a month on these recent ones.

by the way

I was the chick standing behind the celt cunts screaming..

OH HELL YEA!

then the bitches gave me an evil look and I gave them the "hail president scroob' sign from Space balls and went on my evil happy way :)

THE DARK LORD HAS SPOKEN

I absolutely fell in love with this story! Both of Alceo and Gaylnn are great, I loved how you wrote them. Thank you so much for writing and sharing...and will be waiting patiently to see if you add anymore on these two.

SO GOOD

I can't believe it has taken me so long to get around to reading this. The characters are realistic, the story just sucked me in. I had to read all of the chapters at once. Can't wait for the next chapter!

missing it

missing this story SO much!!! fell in love with it hotsprings!! hurry back :)

Good job!!

That's the sweetest story. It says that there are some men out there that's not afraid of love. And that they want something different.

Yeah!!!!

I really loved this story. Great ending

is this the end?

loved this story. was this the final chapter

More...

This is one of my favorite stories and I cannot wait for more Alceo & Galynn :) You're a really awesome writer :D

More!!!!!!!!!!!

Please don't let this be the last chapter I would love to read more about Alceo and Galynn. This is by far my favorite story ever

It's been two months!

Please! Don't we get another installment??! I'm dying for another chapter :)

Don't leave us hanging! please add more soon!

please please please!!!!

Don't leave us hanging with this story!!.....this has to be the fourth time i read this story. it is sooo good!!!

Come'on

Some stories here at Literotica never get finished and I know Distractions sort of had a long peak (climax LOL) and then she's off to school so I could see how writing a story w/o Gavin or away from Gavin would take a lot of creative energy.

BUT Ceo & Galynn are right there. At school together, just steppin' out. Already confronting the football ho's yet there's still a gauntlet to run w/public opinion and comments from others and the challenge of having a campus-wide, famous boyfriend.

As a big girl, I'm asking you to write more - throw in some challenges and misunderstandings - and give them a nice ending????

Thanks for writing!

Love your story!

Pleeeeease write more!

Please finish writing this story! It was such a good story, I loved the characters and their relasionship sooo much that its hearbreaking top think that it may end so openended. I know that as a writer its sometimes easy to get distracted and not have time or ideas for a story. But I ask that when you do have time to write, that put it into this particular story.

mooore!!

I LOVE YOUR STORIES.. PLEASE FINISH THEM!! YOUR FANS ARE BEGGING!

Great story!

This story, and especially this section with the er... uhm.. 'Celtic cunts,' reminds me a lot of the Mexican telenovela La Fea Mas Bella. Galynn is Letty (Leticia) and Alceo is Don Fernando. It just doesn't take Alceo as long as it did Don Fernando to realize he was sprung. Lol! Good storyline!

Once Again, I LOVE IT!

I hope this isn't the end of the story....we want more, WE Want More, WE WANT MORE! LOL

Loved it...

More please!

Please continue with this story it's to good not to continue.