All Comments on 'Off to College Ch. 02'

please

That is too cute, have a feeling Daddy and Grandpa are gonna be pissed.

Omg, this seems like Deja Vu!

so long to post the next installment!

Would like to know more about Raven & Matthew.... :)

Great story please continue!

Confused O_O

Um...

Now I'm confused xDD

Please continue ^^ You're a fantastic writer! :D

I like the characters and the set up. Can't wait to read more.

What is confusing about his friend saying he loves him? Especially since he returns the feelings. why didn't he say it back since he was all about being honest and relieving Matthew's worries? I love the story and hope you continue. I would just say to watch details. His mom said in ch 1 that Matthew moved there in 2nd grade. Then he says he remembers meeting him in pre-school. Also his dad was a 'tool monkey' and in ch 2 he wants him to follow dad into business and spend other people's money so I assume he's in finance.

Aside from that, I like the picture you draw of the place they're camping and hope you continue to draw more of a picture of the lives of the boys. I really hope you continue and stay with them through the trip and off to college.

Please continue this story. There's a tenderness and reality to it that isn't common in gay porn and there's a hint of far more to come. Well done

A really nice story which could have developed in many ways.

It’s a pity when authors abandon stories. There may be many good reasons for this, failure of inspiration, general writer’ cramp, life’s interventions, even a need to develop other interests.

But you had a real gift and it’s a pity to let it go to waste. It would be great if you could return to this story but in any event thanks for what you have already posted

...begging for a third and fourth chapter at least! Bring them to the point here where there is a mutual realization that they love each other, have their first kiss and strip each other's clothes for a good make-out session. This is budding love at its best, and given their maturity, lets give one of them a bit of sexy chest hair as I consider both of these young men to be MEN.