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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/19/11

Good, but 'fridge' instead of 'frig' would make it better. No need for the hyphen in 'nightclub' either.

I gave it a five.

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by twelveoone03/20/11

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WOW, the only thing missing is some Depression glassware. This is pretty grim. I'm not sure if it is overplayed. A five.

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by greenmountaineer03/21/11

Great word selection in "humanimal" and "my square robotic friend.". Not sure about "depression-variety garden" in the last line, however, because I think was well established by then. Still a five for me nonetheless.

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