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Utopia Ch. 01

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by psychoticflyingmonkey03/21/11

excellent start. i hope this story develops into a series. you've established the character well i think.

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by Vixandra03/22/11

Very nice

An excellent, if short, first story. Look forward to more.

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by crypticravings12/12/12

I loved the concept and the writing. For a story based on a virtual reality, it seemed more real than many other stories I've read; mine included. I'm moving on to Ch. 02 with anticipation.

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by magic10fingers411/20/13

Well done -

This reply is like the story - having been written long ago and then no additional stories by the author - damn!

We are pavlovian - and just add our replies!

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