This series is really well done. The plot line is erotic and the description is excellent. Unerstanding that we're all amateurs at writing, I could have used a bit more development relative to why Pat took to the G/G thing so quickly. Plus I just expected that at the end of the day, there would be a three way involving hubby, Mona and Pat.
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Anonymous03/25/11
Looking Forward to the Fourth
I wondered, too, at first, how Pat took to Mona's intimate ministrations so quickly, but you know what? Very soon after, it didn't matter. Their intimacy was so sensuous and so erotic, I was delightfully lost in the description. It was written at a perfect pace with just the right amount of interaction between the two. (I would have liked more interaction between Pat & Irina, but who's quibbling?). I can't wait for that fourth visit. Thanks!
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Anonymous03/28/11
REALLY SENSUAL ++++
A good massage series, how about Pat becoming a masseuse and making Mona's a real Parlor and let their be a couple of maseurs to "service" the female clients as well as offering "couples" massages.Please keep giving us your sexy massage stories.
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Anonymous04/27/11
Great story
But Pats newly shaved bare pussy grew back rather fast...details details
English
Really Nice Piece Of Writing
This series is really well done. The plot line is erotic and the description is excellent. Unerstanding that we're all amateurs at writing, I could have used a bit more development relative to why Pat took to the G/G thing so quickly. Plus I just expected that at the end of the day, there would be a three way involving hubby, Mona and Pat.
Looking Forward to the Fourth
I wondered, too, at first, how Pat took to Mona's intimate ministrations so quickly, but you know what? Very soon after, it didn't matter. Their intimacy was so sensuous and so erotic, I was delightfully lost in the description. It was written at a perfect pace with just the right amount of interaction between the two. (I would have liked more interaction between Pat & Irina, but who's quibbling?). I can't wait for that fourth visit. Thanks!
REALLY SENSUAL ++++
A good massage series, how about Pat becoming a masseuse and making Mona's a real Parlor and let their be a couple of maseurs to "service" the female clients as well as offering "couples" massages.Please keep giving us your sexy massage stories.
Great story
But Pats newly shaved bare pussy grew back rather fast...details details
clarification
the "nest of curls obscuring Pat's crotch" was Irina's head of hair as she had her face glued to my wife's crotch
I agree, it's perhaps a bit confusing
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