by electric1
I actually had to read this twice to make sure I got it, and it's extremely well done. Kudos
I think I only watched one or two episodes of this show but you did a great job of showing off your writing skill. Good luck in the contest.
You captured Veronica's voice perfectly. And Mac is one of the things I miss most about that show. She was cute as a button and definitely underutilized. Unfortunately, Tina Majorino has said definitively she won't ever do nude scenes, so fantasy is all we're left with.
Thank you, everyone, for kind comments. I was expecially heartened by diggypop. I was hoping I'd successfully channeled Mars. Glad someone agrees I succeeded. And yes, I too think Tina is cute.
having rewatched veronica mars recently this captures her charm very well, in a sexy context. very well done