for a first, or should I say, a second time. I'd suggest reading some other stories here to get a better sense of story writing. HTH
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Anonymous04/02/11
Wow, that was a hot story!! Wish it was longer though, and that they had got to the anal sex part.
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Anonymous06/21/15
Continue?
Well done, well written with wonderfully appealing characters. So, how about a continuation of the story. I would like to know what happens at least for the duration of their parents being away.
Want more doesn't seem like it finishes there please another couple of chapters to see where this goes. Hopefully they stay together just them and no one else involved.
English
way to short
Good Read
Great Story !!!!! Well written and sexy as hell.
Not bad.....
for a first, or should I say, a second time. I'd suggest reading some other stories here to get a better sense of story writing. HTH
Wow, that was a hot story!! Wish it was longer though, and that they had got to the anal sex part.
Continue?
Well done, well written with wonderfully appealing characters. So, how about a continuation of the story. I would like to know what happens at least for the duration of their parents being away.
Finish
Want more doesn't seem like it finishes there please another couple of chapters to see where this goes. Hopefully they stay together just them and no one else involved.
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