seemed very rushed and somewhat clinical, almost like a report or confession. (although this is understandable if it is really a true account) i think you can make this story a lot more interesting and exciting by adding more description.
If indeed that is a true account you might call yourself lucky, but the really lucky ones are Aaron and his horny boys. This is a nice tale of a good old gang bang but entirely too short. Let's have more along these same lines.
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Anonymous03/24/11
good
I think it was a good story , don't add to it just tell the truth the way it happened.
English
seemed very rushed and somewhat clinical, almost like a report or confession. (although this is understandable if it is really a true account) i think you can make this story a lot more interesting and exciting by adding more description.
IF
If indeed that is a true account you might call yourself lucky, but the really lucky ones are Aaron and his horny boys. This is a nice tale of a good old gang bang but entirely too short. Let's have more along these same lines.
good
I think it was a good story , don't add to it just tell the truth the way it happened.
eh
You were a fail on details. Just because you're claiming it's true, doesnt make it hotter than if u had put all the details out there.
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