All Comments on 'The Piss Test'

LMAO

Spell sheck would be nice

If I didn't think you were a douchebag asshole from your story, you just confirmed it with your comment.

You're right, you're not Mark Twain, he had intelligence.

Leave the dialectic speech to the people who know how to do it without sounding like a moron.

dialectic: of, pertaining to, or of the nature of logical argumentation.

http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/dialectic

I think this should go in the humor section. LOL. Don't get me wrong, i liked it, only because i laughed pretty hard. This is the first story i've seen on this site with an accent, so i laughed at that surprise.

I would only suggest toning down the accent. Most southerners don't have that stereotypical thick southern accent that you see in movies/T.V. They're not butchering and cutting short every other word they pronounce. I know your trying to go for erotic but it came out humorous IMO. Its still good though. I bet it took a lot of time to write in this characters accent, you just over did it a little.

..... But overall it was a good plot. keep on writing. I want to read more.

I laughed so hard.....first at your story, loved every minute of it (By the way, I felt it was written well enough that I never gave the accent or dialect a second thought) and second I laughed even harder at your reply to the idiots. I have to say that you are now one of my favorite authors on this site.

"Finally, this is why I don't bother writing or submitting these much anymore. Because of the idiots."

Please don't let the chowder heads stop you from submitting, Just because of a few stubborn people, who don't even have the guts to leave their name with their asinine comments. :P

Please continue....thanks