Taken Ch. 04

nice

Glad you came back with another chapter! Enjoyed it!

Long overdue but extremely worth the wait.... 5 stars

Thank you for the awesome chapter. It was a wonderful read. I cnnot wait for the next chapter.

Finally!

Please update more often.

very good

Thank you for the new chapter, you are a very talented writer, please keep them coming

Awesome...

I'm thoroughly enjoying this story, and was excited to see the new chapter posted. I'm really liking the direction it's going. One tip... Alicia will "bear" Gabriel's children, as in "give birth to." If she were to "bare" his children, she would be stripping them of their clothing... :) An easy mix-up to make. Keep up the good work.

~Caramel

Given Up

I was beginning to think you have given up on finishing this story. I can say I'm glad you didn't. This is a really good chapter, filled with all sorts of emotion not only for Alicia but for Gabe also. I can't wait to see what happens nex, please don't make me wait as long this time.

Yay! You are back!

Thank you for the fabulous update. I've been checking for updaates regularly. Please continue with this story. The characters are endearing.

Dry opinion

Very complicated emotions and deep meanings.

yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

you came back!!!!! love this series so far..keep it up!

Ohh wow

great update, i love it, I can't wait for them to realize what is happening to them, ohh his brother has some explaining to do.

Please.

This is an awesome story. Please post the next chapter.. We will be waiting..

Awesome Update!!!!!

Yessss.... Like all your other fans I am happy to see another update of this story!!!! I love it and I am glad that you had time to update and I will be anxiously awaiting another update:) :) :)

Hmmmm

I wish I can say i was happy with this chapter, but I'm not. I thought Alicia was stronger than what you are making her out to be. she is a nothing like in the first chapter. I like the story but was hoping for a more stronger female especially a black one at that! IMO.

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Maria40 I don't agree with you... I don't think A has lost any of her tenacity I mean how exactly do you expect her to behave? She just lost her virginity, had a weird dream, found out she slept with a were and had yet another strange dream... I'd say she is holding her own!

Great chapter JAMMANN... Hope you can post again soon :)

nice update with a nice twist/plot woven into the story, now the wait to see how you will unravel all of this

Amazing!

I'm loving your story and can't wait for more!!

Good Story

I personally am not into the reincarnation thing in stories or movies especially those that go back in time then the present then back again on and on it goes. Where half the tale will be Gabriel trying to convince Alicia he really LOVES her and not a memory.

Otherwise FANTASTIC story!!!!

Not what I forseen....

This is not the way I seen this story going exactly, but I will hang in there until the end. I cant get into the whole reincarnation thing either and it threw me off. However I liked everything else about the story except that. I also am hoping that in ch 5 Alicia will get her ass out of that bedroom and we can see some scene changes and interactions that involve these two working together. Also I was wondering if we will be seeing Ball-less, the wicked witch of the east and her offspring again?

Not forr the Author.

This is to bulltlr,

I left a comment of how I felt about the story. I did put IMO. everyone read and see's things differently. Just leave a comment for the author as how you feel and don't worry what others right in the future! I never said I didn't like the story just didn.t like the chapter period.

A wonderful update, very good!!!!!

This is one story I rush to see the updates for! A very great installment of the story, I must say I didn't see the events coming. So it was a wonderful twist, but there is so many questions needing answers, emotions to be explored by the characters and loose ends to be address so I can't wait for the other chapters you have in the works. You did a great job because you weaved a tangled web with Gabe and Alicia and now the blast from his past. Can't wait to see what you will create and write next so keep up the good work!

all i have to say is this plz dont take to long to update again

Loved It!!!!!

Great update, I totally didn't see that last bit coming. Can't wait for more.

I'm glad you updated. I'm not into the reincarnation thing either for the reasons other readers have mentioned. Its just hard to convince someone you love them and not to feel like a replacement. It does usually take have the story of one convincing the other they love the person they are now. I will hang in there and read upcoming chapters to see where this is going.

Very intriguing. I am most surprised that he seems to have no idea about this shared past yet, she does. I look forward to seeing where this is going. I know his family is aware of whatever the truth of their past and of who they are is and from what Michael said on the phone as he left Gabriel, it sounds like they don't want them together. I wonder why they didn't come in the 5 days he stayed away from her and try to stop it. Hope you write more soon!

Great job

I'm glad you are beginning to address why he kidnapped and bit her. She needs to know everything. Is she ever going to return to school? He needs to tell her she will be provided for, loved and free to go to school and or work as she likes. He owes he that much. I think forced into being a brood mare without warning or permission was mean. Never mind she isn't even a wolf yet how will that work? Maybe pregnancy wont take untill after a full moon and she changes for the 1st time. Great job but send her back to school she needs to be happy and does her uncle know she is safe?. Thanks please keep writing

Good

I enjoyed this chapter, even though it's really hard for me to understand the pull between mates that would somehow override the "don't fuck me, you creepy psycho kidnapper" instinct that seems more natural. I hope that Gabe and Alicia actually talk to each other in the next chapter. It would also be nice to hear from some of the supporting characters. I think two of them so far have hinted at the fact that Alicia was already known to them, that Gabe had "found her again" or something. Isn't it time we know what that's about? My curiosity is piqued!

i'm sorry

I kept not reading the first chapter of this story because I dreaded that this wasn't what I would expect. I am a black woman and I love werewolf stories that involve us! This is more than i expected and hit deeper that I thought with the mixing of what happened back then when he wanted to be with a black girl and it was looked down upon...

Can't wait for your next chapter! :)

love the story... can't wait until next update...

time space

you need to shorten you time space between the length of time you take to post your next chapter.it makes one lose the flame/fire to keep reading.

agree with time space

This story is really nice; however, the delay from one chapter posting to the next might deter people from reading the series.

YOUGOTTALOVE....

Yougottalove a good werewolf story. This is good story. I love the plot. I adore the characters. This story is a hit. Please find a way for Alicia to love and accept Gabriel. He deserve a happy ended.

Need more!!!!!!

Please update real soon you are doing wonderful job...don't stop!!!!

Too Good

I need more, fast!

PLEASE DON'T WAIT TOO LONG!!!!

For the next chapter-This s&%& is HOTTTTT!!!

You got me

I'll admit that I didn't want got get into this cause I thought it would be some weird crap, but I am hooked. More please!!&

Five stars all the way!

I'm not a fan of paranormal romance but since this is interracial, I decided to give it a try and wow I had to admit I've truly fallen head over heel in love with this wonderful tale. The plot and characters are to die for and I simply had to complete all the four chapters in one sitting. So please do continue with your awesome story and do not let your readers (who have faithfully read, rate and review) down by leaving the story halfway through.

LOVE!!!!

This Story is absolutely wonderful you just have to continue!!!

i am really enjoying your story. looking forward to reading the next chapter and to find out if she will tell him about her dreams.

HAD ME CAPTIVATED!!!

The suspense is killing me. Can hardly wait for the next chapter.

Wow! I've "fallen" for another "Gabriel"

Great story and nice tie into the past as well as the present. I truly enjoyed your story. The passion, intensity, love, everything Gabe's feelings for her! Your writing is fantastic, clear, just WELL DONE. I am loving the Alpha males who love black women. thank you for not turning it into some kind of disgusting fetish.


Scorpmoon

great!

Please finish this story. It's great!! I'm caught up in this story.

Sorry for your lost...

Hope you are feeling somewhat better. May God bless you through this difficult time

PLEASE CONTINUE

Can't wait for the next chapter. GREAT story.

Great story

Waiting on the next chapter

more!

please continue, its getting good!

Omg

This is getting good pls continue

UPDATE

Enough said update PLEASE.

It's been too long

Please update as soon as possible I really love this story so far

Great shit

I love it..i just hope she is not a recarnation becuz 2 me dat just seem a little far fetched..alicia is her own unquie character i wouldnt really like she being adele of the future..hwever its up 2 u.i just want a good read.update soon..