All Comments on 'Hip To Be Square'

Very good, nice twist on the usual mind-control stories! A good and pleasant change from the usual smart to dumb stories.

A beautiful reversal of the cliche and misogynistic bimboization story. Kudos!

could you develop a series around this.

I thought UGA was the top party school?

While it wasn't especially arousing as far as most erotica goes, the story was cute and the writing was very entertaining.

Looks like the inventor is in for a bad case of "be careful what you wish for".

Very funny twist at the end, " those bitches ". Please keep writing, Panther fan.

Very satisfying to know the self-proclaimed "Nice Guy"(tm) didn't get to just wallow in pussy after violating his subjects' autnomy, etc. Good for the women!

Okay, I've read a lot in this category, and a lot of your works, and I get really turned off by the bimbo-trope because I like _talking_ to women too, and bimbification really rings my morality alarm bells. This, however, was like watching women develop their minds to match their bodies. I loved it so freaking much

The best part, though? Just as it hurts me to read about an intelligent woman loosing her mind, reading this was as nourishing as it was arousing. It actually made me laugh, it felt so good to read. I hope more people write stories like this.

That was really good!

I love your stories, but this one was by far my favourite :)

Would love to see some more of this reversed trope.

Clever!