The original "Unintended" is my favorite Scorpio story; I am very pleased that the sequel stands up well alongside the original.
A good read, a good story, and most of all... totally believable.
keep putting out your GR8 stories...
And yet so impossible for too many people to grasp -
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A Worthy Sequel
The original "Unintended" is my favorite Scorpio story; I am very pleased that the sequel stands up well alongside the original.
Well done!
A good read, a good story, and most of all... totally believable.
series
keep putting out your GR8 stories...
So simple -
And yet so impossible for too many people to grasp -
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Back to Unintended Consequences - Melissa Ch. 02 or
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