All Comments on 'The Ex Comes to Visit'

A straight forward story of a man taking reasonable actions in a timely manner. <P>

Allowing the ex to stay with them was pretty bad but in the long run may have been the best thing. Given her actions if she might have hooked up with Carl even if he was not staying with them. Then he never would have known.<P>

Thanks for sharing.

The only problem, as always with JPB is that I was afraid he would turn into a voyeur! At least she insisted on the condoms!

shame he's marriage was over but as she was going to be black mailed, into doing that more often, so his relationship would have suffered any how.

better to find out at the time and brake cleanly than later.

yep the divorce would have been messy but still.

good clean and sensible actions, good read.

thanks for shearing.

Good story.

He screwed up when he let her talk him into letting her ex-husband stay with them.

No good was ever going to come out of that.

He did find out what kind of slut she was.

Thanks for the read.

Nice clean story. It was nice how he realized that she was willing and that there was no marriage to save. He got control of the situation and ended it. Very smart. I was thinking as the guy was taking pictures "Ah, evidence". Unfortunately she was a stupid woman and that didn't make her very interesting. It might have been good to see her suffer a bit more but I guess that's like beating a dog with a stick. The dog is too dumb to understand why you are beating it or to learn anything from it.

The husband showed some balls...but I would have kept the camera for evidence along with any money in their wallets for payment for the whore's services.

JPB,

Good response vs bad reaction.

Thanks for sharing on Lit.

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A story by JPB that gets a vote over a 1 star.

But still like your more complex stories better were the outcome is uncertain.

Thanks for sharing it!

And he gets a camera out of it.

Again........No Wimp!!!

Thanks for the quick, great read.

Some guys don't show their emotion for a few weeks after an emotional experience. In this case, our guy seemed to be quite in control. Point being, he had to be in love with her to get married.

Anyway, not to labor away at mundane trivia...thanks for a short, but very good quickie!

Well you know the rest. Five Stars!

since there was nothing remotely erotic about it.

"Fran worked on me for three days and finally, against my better judgement, I told her she could do it."

Thats when I thought "Shit.. here we go again"

And this is when I knew it was going to be alright.

"I went down into the basement and opened my gun safe, took out the Model 870 and slid three shells into the magazine and headed back upstairs."

Great little flash story. 5*'s

Like the Idea that he waited to see exactly what he was walking in on and the "CLACK CLACK" of the Shotgun.

and then to be given allof the proof he would need by the Asshole Ex and his Loving Wife LOL.

Too Good.

JPB I know you could come up with chapter 2

A good story, nothing new or surprising here.

I enjoyed the "Kodak" moment and the two guys leaving the camera who will not enjoy this Kodak moment, just like I'm sure the Romans are sorry they didn't know about Mr. Eastman.

However the story is impossible.

1. Rather than allow the ex to stay for 4 days, he would have paid for a cheap motel room

2. The other guy would be impossible since she didn't know him or plan on him.

One thing is for certain. The poor husband would be be fucked by the family court.

Now there were some good consequences with a little begging thrown in to show that she was sad she lost him.

This woman made the common mistake of only remembering the good times. If/when she goes back to her ex, she will re-discover those things she did not like.

Thanks for the good read.

Well that was short, sour and to the point. I liked his reaction and his follow-up, but I couldn't help but think that he should have seen it coming and simply told her "NO"! It didn't add up. Why was he coming and why didn't he have enough money to stay at a motel? If he didn't have money, why was he coming in the first place? Nope. He was right - he got setup and she got what she deserved. Good one Bob!

Fucking cheating cunt. He did the right thing, kicked her out, covered in piss. Damn. I hate cheaters.

Short and sweet with excellent writing. JPB. Have always liked your writing style. Maybe not all of your stories though. This one met my criteria. Catch the cheater, kick her to the curb. No fuss, no muss. Nice touch with leaving the camera. Made everything cut and dried.

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He TOLD her it wasn't a good idea.

Giving her EVERY benefit of the doubt, that she didn't plan it and Thursday was some sort of an "accident", she should have said, "Shit, Hubby was right, we never should have had Carl stay here," and sent Carl on his way.

Was he right? Did she plan the whole thing from the start and thought she could get away with it? Or did she get caught up in the moment of good memories? Her ex-husband couldn't be much of a man. Who comes to town on business and can't afford a hotel? That made no sense. Glad that he dumped the bitch. Funnier yet when the ex peed on her.

It was short.

A JPB story that I can enjoy. He should have kneecapped both of them.

Every woman is a lying, cheating slut when they think they can get away with it.

Lights action camera

Almost all good 4 stars

More punishment for ex and friend

Not enough punishment,especially to Carl.He should have shot him in the knee and claimed self defence as the three of them threaten ed him.

Some idiot said every woman is a lying cheating whore, no. Your mother and wife maybe, not all. Fuck off with your generalizations.

She doesn't value her marriage. It is just a convenience. The good news is that this story is FAR beyond what most people think is possible in their lives and I honestly hope they are right.

How about including an ending?

Don't you wish you lived in a world where your wife loved you enough and had compassion for others so she could offer her ex a place to stay and not be the least bit tempted? There are no second chances on a situation like this.

"Honey, I found some fire ants, a bunch of termites and some killer bees who don't have a place to stay, and I was wondering..."

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All 5ives! Great story!

Typical story for JPB about gangbanging whore of a wife with imbecile unobserving husband. Always the same, always the same but at least this time short and to the point.

d2d2 - I really can't understand why someone who has said time and again that you can't stand a writer yet apparently reads all his stories. Wait a minute, I'll bet you are one of Bob's ex-wives! Thanks for your story Bob, 5 stars.

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Another non story where JPB recycles her usual bs plot.

Just the average JPB story that doesn't get finished. It would actually work the way it is, if he actually did shoot their knee caps.

What excuse could she possibly have for boinking 2 guys? In their own house no less. My guess is that they were getting away with it for a while, got complacent and got caught.

If Carl is coming to town for work,why aren't they paying for an hotel.That alone should have made him very suspicious as to why he had been invited to stay.

Yup, another really fun read!

Average at best. Three stars for an incomplete story that lacked in the telling.

JPB

Three stars. The premise limited the story to Four stars, but actually agreeing to allow the Ex to stay there dropped it to three stars.