The Ex Comes to Visit

Straight forward

A straight forward story of a man taking reasonable actions in a timely manner.

Allowing the ex to stay with them was pretty bad but in the long run may have been the best thing. Given her actions if she might have hooked up with Carl even if he was not staying with them. Then he never would have known.

Thanks for sharing.

Ditoo to Fregen

The only problem, as always with JPB is that I was afraid he would turn into a voyeur! At least she insisted on the condoms!

lucky escape, anda good clean brake.

shame he's marriage was over but as she was going to be black mailed, into doing that more often, so his relationship would have suffered any how.

better to find out at the time and brake cleanly than later.

yep the divorce would have been messy but still.

good clean and sensible actions, good read.

thanks for shearing.

Short and to the point

Good story.

He screwed up when he let her talk him into letting her ex-husband stay with them.

No good was ever going to come out of that.

He did find out what kind of slut she was.

Thanks for the read.

A slut is a slut

Nice clean story. It was nice how he realized that she was willing and that there was no marriage to save. He got control of the situation and ended it. Very smart. I was thinking as the guy was taking pictures "Ah, evidence". Unfortunately she was a stupid woman and that didn't make her very interesting. It might have been good to see her suffer a bit more but I guess that's like beating a dog with a stick. The dog is too dumb to understand why you are beating it or to learn anything from it.

One of your best stories...

The husband showed some balls...but I would have kept the camera for evidence along with any money in their wallets for payment for the whore's services.

Yes!

JPB,

Good response vs bad reaction.

Thanks for sharing on Lit.


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Finally

A story by JPB that gets a vote over a 1 star.

was a good one 5 ***** stars

But still like your more complex stories better were the outcome is uncertain.

A good one pager!!

Thanks for sharing it!

Great Flash Story.

And he gets a camera out of it.

Yes

Again........No Wimp!!!

Thanks for the quick, great read.

Some guys don't show their emotion for a few weeks after an emotional experience. In this case, our guy seemed to be quite in control. Point being, he had to be in love with her to get married.

Anyway, not to labor away at mundane trivia...thanks for a short, but very good quickie!

Even a blind squirrel...

Well you know the rest. Five Stars!

Should be in the non-erotic category

since there was nothing remotely erotic about it.

"Fran worked on me for three days and finally, against my better judgement, I told her she could do it."

Thats when I thought "Shit.. here we go again"

And this is when I knew it was going to be alright.

"I went down into the basement and opened my gun safe, took out the Model 870 and slid three shells into the magazine and headed back upstairs."


Great little flash story. 5*'s

Great Story

Like the Idea that he waited to see exactly what he was walking in on and the "CLACK CLACK" of the Shotgun.
and then to be given allof the proof he would need by the Asshole Ex and his Loving Wife LOL.
Too Good.

more

JPB I know you could come up with chapter 2

O tempora, O mores... (Cicero).

A good story, nothing new or surprising here.
I enjoyed the "Kodak" moment and the two guys leaving the camera who will not enjoy this Kodak moment, just like I'm sure the Romans are sorry they didn't know about Mr. Eastman.

I enjoyed the story enough to give it 4 stars

However the story is impossible.

1. Rather than allow the ex to stay for 4 days, he would have paid for a cheap motel room
2. The other guy would be impossible since she didn't know him or plan on him.

One thing is for certain. The poor husband would be be fucked by the family court.

Much, Much Better

Now there were some good consequences with a little begging thrown in to show that she was sad she lost him.

This woman made the common mistake of only remembering the good times. If/when she goes back to her ex, she will re-discover those things she did not like.

Thanks for the good read.

Womp'em side the head!

Well that was short, sour and to the point. I liked his reaction and his follow-up, but I couldn't help but think that he should have seen it coming and simply told her "NO"! It didn't add up. Why was he coming and why didn't he have enough money to stay at a motel? If he didn't have money, why was he coming in the first place? Nope. He was right - he got setup and she got what she deserved. Good one Bob!

Whore

Fucking cheating cunt. He did the right thing, kicked her out, covered in piss. Damn. I hate cheaters.

Very Nice Story

Short and sweet with excellent writing. JPB. Have always liked your writing style. Maybe not all of your stories though. This one met my criteria. Catch the cheater, kick her to the curb. No fuss, no muss. Nice touch with leaving the camera. Made everything cut and dried.

I THINK THE EXES ARE GOING TO SWITCH ROLES AGAIN

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) broke up with me couple of weeks ago after 5 years. He started behaving strange when he got a new job

Maey, My ex (Russ) broke up with me couple of weeks ago after 5 years. He started behaving strange when he got a new job. I later found out he was hanging out with a girl he met at his place of work. He now talks to me anyhow and even beat me up. I just never wanted to lose my man. I love him so much. I told a cuz about it, and she gave me a contact of a spell caster she has used before; +1 (443) 459-1140, vudoospell@gmail.com. I called him immediately because i was so desperate and losing my mind already. The spell caster was very honest to let me know that in 24 hours or less I would have Russ back. I was skeptical cos I haven't done this before. But my cousin encouraged me and told me about how she got results from his spell too.
After he has done the spell, Russ sms me and call some hours later, he said "baby i'm sorry, can we meet pls?".
Since then he has been great having him back.
Thanks to vudoo priest.