Strip Poker Set Up

Interesting read

I enjoyed this more than I thought I would after the first few paragraphs. I think you could explore the adventures of Charles and Laura further and I would read them. Keep writing you have a unique style and it is engaging to me.

Hi

I really liked the way you introduced the different POVs of the story. Very engaging and made it feel like you were really talking to the reader.

I sort of wish Lauren hadn't been part of setting it all up. I would have preferred Glynn (was that his name?) and Tiffany being the sole architects - having seen this couple's attraction. But that's just a personal wish :)

Too much

Get yourself an editor-or just be more brutal with your own work. The setup to the setup which came before the setup was just too much.

Probably a great story, but I gave up.

Liked it!

Good job! Keep writing. A few typos here and there but it did not detract from the story.

I liked it too

I would have liked these 2 main characters to have at least a second chapter, but this fairy tale wrapped up '... everyone lived happily ever after' so quickly that I cannot see this one continuing. Pity!

More Lauren

Great story with a twist. I'd like to see where this goes with them.
I like that she is kind of sweet and discovering sex with him. I'd like to see her discover more.

Excellent Story

It was a great story but the setup needed to be a little less obvious. But overall a great story and I would love to read more.

Thanks!

Very nice! Thanks for sharing.

And yes, I would like to see where this goes.

good story. dont ruin it by bringing in another sexual player. keep it romantic.

Bullshit

Owners of businesses never do this shit with their employees and employees who have not been promoted for decades never become VPs. It is all crap

couple of things

In one way I liked the story where girl gets boy, and it is an unusual twist.
It made me very uncomfortable, In many ways I am chuckie boy...no Lauren. Had I been at the party, when they started the strip thing I would have invited myself to leave, what the fuck I was leaving the company anyway.
the super promotion --not a good idea--can lead to all sorts of management problems, not the least of which is EEO complaints for creating an uncomfortable workplace.
As wonderful as our country is it still has and will always have growing pains. Discrimination comes in many forms. There are two very big elements, sexual discrimination and sexual harassment in this story. Both of these elements can will and has broken the back of many a company, a person and lives
I envy the hell out of Charles, and this is fiction so I know all rules are out, but I have served as an EEO specialist and my trusty shining armour stands ready in the corner
On another level I thought the story is very well done, polished even (see me being Charles rescuing you from the skewering I just gave)
Ya I got a fucked up mind, wanna do something about it? Meet me out back and we will settle it. You go ahead, If I am not there in 5 min start with out me -- I would have been long gone out the front door.
If you wanna say something about what I have said, say it to my "face" take my Id to the "Y"
--this comment has not been read or reviewed, I posted it just the way my mind and fingers have worked---

I liked both of YOUR comments

The sequel would fun for this and the other -

This was fun - not very realistic in today's litigious reality but hell it is your story and it would have been fun -

Lauren was made to be a very interesting young girl - relatively inexperienced but unbelievably willing if it got her Charlie - even bold to go through with it all.

The Bosses - were well nuts lol but cool too -

A fun read -a good future I hope -

A fun story.

Not at all plausible but just the same I rated it 5 stars.

Your main characters may be a bit gormless but yes please let us have a sequel.

Predictable. Well written. It's about time that a "nice guy" got the girl, and the girl got the gold ring.

Interesting

What I found most interesting - alright, unusual, was the story being told by 3 people. It was a cute romance and I'd love to see where you take it next.

Yes

I do want a sequel. I really love this story. 5*, of course.

I Want My Sequel!

Great story I gave it five stars. Am looking forward to a sequel.

Anatomical ignorance

It's a pity that you, and many other Literotica authors have to use vagina to name the female genitalia when vulva is the correct word.
MAC