by cricketmuse
Wow looks like Kiera can hold her own and use her abilities to get the info that they needed not alot but some at least. Figured Gray would be pe'od when he knew that she was in there with that prisoner good thing that Lena got between them when she did. Kiera needs to know what all would happen if she decides to be fully mated to Gray and I think Lena is the best person to tell her.
Oh I have thoughts and ideas on this dark one but I am hoping I am wrong about it. Very excited to see this new chapter yayaya another great chapter! Cant wait for your next post!
So very glad you came back to Lit! I thought you were gone for good. Love the story and the characters, although Kiera's behavior sometimes comes across as irritating, but that's just me. =)
Anyway, like I said, glad you're back and hope to read another chapter soon.
Thank you for being back, indeed!
This is so fascinating, I can hardly wait.
Good luck with all your writing!
I'm so glad you've submitted again and continued your story!! I was on the brink of giving up hope :( As always though, your story was amazing and well worth the wait!
I still love that attraction between Grayson and Kiera, and I love the powers Kiera has. Wonderful chapter!
I want to know more...please keep this installment coming *s*
That was very very mean to leave us there! I love the series. This chapter was great as it upped the ante by adding the 'dark creature' and showing us how powerful Kiera is. I look forward to Lena's talk with her and hope there is more to it than the commonly accepted aspects of the mating. I was really impressed with the scene where Grayson loses control. You wrote it really well and I felt like I could feel his rage as well as picture it. I'd like to see you write a scene where we get a better picture of Allistaire. We've gotten to know Lena somewhat (and I loved her being able to stand up to Gray...she'll be a good example for Kiera as she accepts her role) I found this story when this new chapter came out but I got from the comments that there was a lot of time between chapters. I really hope you bring us a new one soon. I also hope that we get to know Gray a bit better maybe as a leader and on a more personal level. We know more about Kiera and her past and how she is today than we do about him. We mainly have been exposed to his lust and passion for her. We get that he helped make the pack very prosperous and he clearly has made them a force to be reckoned with the way he's organized their defenses, etc. What might the dark creature want his blood for. What makes him special? I'd like to know more about his personality and something of his past to see how he's a good match for her.
Don't be a meany and leave it here to long. I'm hooked on this story.
Looking forward to reading much more and hoping that it won't take near as long this time.
Thanks for continuing...
LR
This story is freakin' fantastic!!!!! I am now on edge to finish it, so please write and post the next chapter as soon as possible!!
only hope you will not take to long to complete this story as it has taken forever to get to this point. I so want them mated.
ei ei ei.... where is the next chapter. you are taking your sweet time. hmmm... :) please post!!! :)
Let me say first.... I love Kiera! Any woman who can walk up to a werewolf and unleash her own is a plus in my book! When Gray found her and was so angry he wanted to mate and so did she, the whole end made me laugh out loud!
Great Story! Keep it comin
I love this story! Please keep it going and write more soon!!!!!
I'm hooked I started reading this a few hrs ago and just couldn't stop please update soon!!!!
I think that after Keira finds out what mating with Grayson means and actually gets ahold of her emotions that Grayson is either going to be hit hard with her emotions when he gets back or a very pissed of Keira.
I'm surprised that she was willing to go back to his apartment after all that. I would have thought that she'd run away from him. If Lena is about to explain what a mate is, she may still run. He is being high-handed even for an alpha male. Great story!
I am in love with these characters. I can't wait until they actually go through with the mating rituals. I think Kiera and Grayson are a great match. I am a little surprised she decided to go willingly to his apartment, especially after what just took place between them. But I'm so eager to find out what happens next. Please don't wait too long to update your series. Thanks for the submission!
he's gonna need it! will the next installment be up soonish??
i wasnt expecting hiim to attack her like that but it was hot. cant wait to find out wat will happen next plz dont keep me waiting to long.
im reporting this story for awesomeness. wow can't wait for the next chapter i am absolutely loving it so much. the characters so far are exceptional an the storyling is sublime keep up the fantastic imagination.
All I can say is wow. This story is amazing. I rated each chapter 5 stars
Oh COME ON!!! I always have to wait and I can't wait anymore!! Does Kiera kick his ass for going all Alpha on her or what?? ARRRRRGHHH I hate waiting!!! If you don't post the next chapter soon i'm gonna DIE!! =^_^= PK
I love this story and I have checked back often for updates. It drives me crazy when it takes YEARS for a story to wrap up. I really thought you were going to finish this story back in March but I guess I was wrong. You wrote a few chapters in 2008, a few in 2009, skipped 2010 all together and wrote 2 chapters March 2011. *sigh*
This is a great story and I really want to read an ending to it. PLEASE finish the story or at least say that you are not going to finish it anytime soon.
I really really like this story and I can't wait to read what Lena is going to say!!
Pls hurry!!!!! Liking the tension and how it turns to passion. Continue;)
9 chapters in three years! Is sad for those of us who have been waiting so long.
Would love to see the rest of this story!
Nice to see more to this story. Hope your muse will help you work your magic and continue writing.
I got lucky and found your story and read all 9 chapters. Although I can truly say that I would love for you hurry up and finish, I know how fickle the muse is. I look forward to your next chapter(s) when you are feeling the fires of creation again. Thank you for a very enjoyable read.
My girl....my girl.............my girl......
I understand that one has life outside of writing, but this was so damn good!!!
Please don't rush...we all want quality, not just words on a page.
So looking forward to another chapter in your time.
Please continue, this is the hottest story I have read in a long time. I love Kiera's strength, and Gray's response to it... Anxiously awaiting the next chapter!
Such an enjoyable story i cant wait for your next chapters muahhhh
Oh gosh, you can't leave me hanging like this...I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT! Like I said before, you are VERY talented, keep doing what you are doing. I am really enjoying this story.
Love,
Your Number 1 Fan
that's a great follow up to ch. 8. but everyone is right, too short, give us more, etc.
Please come back to this story--I would love to read more.
Darling love the dynamics between the principal characters especially Gray and Lena.
There are a million questions hanging out there. Will you be answering them soon?
Understand life is demanding....no problem just eager for more of this story.
wait wait wait!!! why did you stop???!!! omg im in love with this story please continue !!!
This story is fabulous and I would really like to read more!
this story is such an amazing read that i cant wait for the next chapter please please update soon cant wait.
This is like one of the best supernatural stories i have read it has great characters. a lot of emotions and really hot sex or great making love......in any case i tot love it
xoxo
Aria
Please, more! more! more! more!
Please, more! more! more! more!
Please, more! more! more! more!
Please, more! more! more! more!
Story hasn't been abandoned, just a bit stuck on some forward movement. If you want rushed swill, I'm probably not your girl.
Love this...need more...it is an addiction.
And for those accusing of the author abandoning the story, sit your butts down and try writing a good, long story fast....you will fail...published authors take months or years to write a complete story for publishing. We are lucky that on this site, our authors can post as they write, so quit complaining and just enjoy this amazing story by this great author!!
I'm really happy that you haven't forgotten about your story. I shall wait patiently. ;)
Great Story So far, but needs to be finished.. Please.
Great story, but where's the rest? It seems every time I find a fantastic story, the writer stops writing in the middle of it. Please, do finish, wonn't you?
I love you really have developed these characters well and your buildup of their relationship and everything flows really well. Keep it up and can't wait to read more as you finish it. Love it so far!
I am loving this story!!! Please do not take forever with more chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I've really gotten into your story. You've created strong characters that I truly like. I hope you plan on coming back and finishing. Once again, really great story. -DC
This is a great story! I wish you would finish it. I find myself daydreaming about these characters and their individual story. Can't wait for more!
I love the characters and how none of them will back down. Please keep writing... I want to see how it ends
Not sure if you are coming back to this story, but i would love to read more.
Why are chtrs 8 & 9 repeats? are you going to post the real ch 8 & ch 9?
More, please! Great character-development and I already have my suspicions about the villain. Your loves scenes are also passionate and wonderful--very different from some of the formulaic scenes I've read, but not in a weird "he put what where?!?" way.
Now I just need more. Let me know if another editor would help. I would be happy to read, edit, and encourage you while selfishly getting my hands on your drafts.
when is this story gonna be updated.............. i fell in love with the moment i started reading it and ever since then i have been waiting for the next chapter..........please post the next chapter soon
Wondering if you are going to carry on with this story or is this it???????
So what will happen next??????? Will more couples form as the story continues???
Who is after Grayson??? What is going to happen to him and Kiera???? When is the next chapters??????????
We are all waiting for you to finish you left at a crucial point in your story.
It has been like, at least 6months since you uploaded this. When will you submit the next chapters?
You have an amazing story and I hope you finish it. Not to mention you get my blood boiling with this heat between these two. I love it!!
Please! PLease!! PLEase!!! PLEAse!!!! PLEASe!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!
Keep Writing!!!
I love this story and hope that you continue it!!!
How could you leave in such suspense. Please, please submit the following chapters asap. I've been drawn in so deeply now, I've been left with so many questions. Lol.
I just found this story & I love it! I do hope that you will be posting lots more of this story! I also hope that you get this post & remember that lots of people love this story & are dying for an update! I hope to read more -- lots more & soon! :)
Really really REALLY looking forward to seeing ch10!!!!!!
First, thank you for your interest in my story. Your comments aleays bring me joy. Second, I will ask that you see my biopage for the short story of why I haven't posted Chap 10 and my recent comment under Chapter 1 for the long story. I ask only that you have patience with me as writing is not as easy as reading, especially when real life presents a series of challenges. Thank you again, and know that this story has not been abandoned for good.
It is hard not to believe that this story will ever be finished since it's last chapter was posted 03/28/11 and it is now 28/7/2013 so yeah we have been very,very patient!!!
I'll need a proof reader & editor, are you interested?
Just read your Bio, sorry that these things have happened but glad you have come through them.
Love this story. Great plot and street characterization build-up! Anxiously awaiting next chapter.
Very well written! I can't tell if i love it or hate it! Ur an amazing writer! Can't WAIT for the next chapter.
Now you've created a cliff hanger. Please finish the story. Your writing is fat paced and exciting.