Wow looks like Kiera can hold her own and use her abilities to get the info that they needed not alot but some at least. Figured Gray would be pe'od when he knew that she was in there with that prisoner good thing that Lena got between them when she did. Kiera needs to know what all would happen if she decides to be fully mated to Gray and I think Lena is the best person to tell her.
Oh I have thoughts and ideas on this dark one but I am hoping I am wrong about it. Very excited to see this new chapter yayaya another great chapter! Cant wait for your next post!
So very glad you came back to Lit! I thought you were gone for good. Love the story and the characters, although Kiera's behavior sometimes comes across as irritating, but that's just me. =)
Anyway, like I said, glad you're back and hope to read another chapter soon.
I'm so glad you've submitted again and continued your story!! I was on the brink of giving up hope :( As always though, your story was amazing and well worth the wait!
That was very very mean to leave us there! I love the series. This chapter was great as it upped the ante by adding the 'dark creature' and showing us how powerful Kiera is. I look forward to Lena's talk with her and hope there is more to it than the commonly accepted aspects of the mating. I was really impressed with the scene where Grayson loses control. You wrote it really well and I felt like I could feel his rage as well as picture it. I'd like to see you write a scene where we get a better picture of Allistaire. We've gotten to know Lena somewhat (and I loved her being able to stand up to Gray...she'll be a good example for Kiera as she accepts her role) I found this story when this new chapter came out but I got from the comments that there was a lot of time between chapters. I really hope you bring us a new one soon. I also hope that we get to know Gray a bit better maybe as a leader and on a more personal level. We know more about Kiera and her past and how she is today than we do about him. We mainly have been exposed to his lust and passion for her. We get that he helped make the pack very prosperous and he clearly has made them a force to be reckoned with the way he's organized their defenses, etc. What might the dark creature want his blood for. What makes him special? I'd like to know more about his personality and something of his past to see how he's a good match for her.
Let me say first.... I love Kiera! Any woman who can walk up to a werewolf and unleash her own is a plus in my book! When Gray found her and was so angry he wanted to mate and so did she, the whole end made me laugh out loud!
Great Story! Keep it comin
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Anonymous04/28/11
I love this story
I love this story! Please keep it going and write more soon!!!!!
I think that after Keira finds out what mating with Grayson means and actually gets ahold of her emotions that Grayson is either going to be hit hard with her emotions when he gets back or a very pissed of Keira.
I'm surprised that she was willing to go back to his apartment after all that. I would have thought that she'd run away from him. If Lena is about to explain what a mate is, she may still run. He is being high-handed even for an alpha male. Great story!
Glad you were finally able to add another chapter...
I am in love with these characters. I can't wait until they actually go through with the mating rituals. I think Kiera and Grayson are a great match. I am a little surprised she decided to go willingly to his apartment, especially after what just took place between them. But I'm so eager to find out what happens next. Please don't wait too long to update your series. Thanks for the submission!
by
Anonymous05/26/11
good luck to Grayson
he's gonna need it! will the next installment be up soonish??
by
Anonymous05/26/11
omg
i wasnt expecting hiim to attack her like that but it was hot. cant wait to find out wat will happen next plz dont keep me waiting to long.
by
Anonymous05/31/11
report ;-)
im reporting this story for awesomeness. wow can't wait for the next chapter i am absolutely loving it so much. the characters so far are exceptional an the storyling is sublime keep up the fantastic imagination.
by
Anonymous06/28/11
Wow
All I can say is wow. This story is amazing. I rated each chapter 5 stars
Oh COME ON!!! I always have to wait and I can't wait anymore!! Does Kiera kick his ass for going all Alpha on her or what?? ARRRRRGHHH I hate waiting!!! If you don't post the next chapter soon i'm gonna DIE!! =^_^= PK
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Anonymous07/14/11
Drives me crazy...
I love this story and I have checked back often for updates. It drives me crazy when it takes YEARS for a story to wrap up. I really thought you were going to finish this story back in March but I guess I was wrong. You wrote a few chapters in 2008, a few in 2009, skipped 2010 all together and wrote 2 chapters March 2011. *sigh*
This is a great story and I really want to read an ending to it. PLEASE finish the story or at least say that you are not going to finish it anytime soon.
I got lucky and found your story and read all 9 chapters. Although I can truly say that I would love for you hurry up and finish, I know how fickle the muse is. I look forward to your next chapter(s) when you are feeling the fires of creation again. Thank you for a very enjoyable read.
My girl....my girl.............my girl......
I understand that one has life outside of writing, but this was so damn good!!!
Please don't rush...we all want quality, not just words on a page.
So looking forward to another chapter in your time.
by
Anonymous10/25/11
Please keep writing!
Please continue, this is the hottest story I have read in a long time. I love Kiera's strength, and Gray's response to it... Anxiously awaiting the next chapter!
Wonderful story! I hope you get a chance to finish it!
by
Anonymous12/12/11
Nooo!
Oh gosh, you can't leave me hanging like this...I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT! Like I said before, you are VERY talented, keep doing what you are doing. I am really enjoying this story.
Love,
Your Number 1 Fan
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Anonymous12/15/11
great...
that's a great follow up to ch. 8. but everyone is right, too short, give us more, etc.
Darling love the dynamics between the principal characters especially Gray and Lena.
There are a million questions hanging out there. Will you be answering them soon?
Understand life is demanding....no problem just eager for more of this story.
English
Can't wait to read more!
Wow looks like Kiera can hold her own and use her abilities to get the info that they needed not alot but some at least. Figured Gray would be pe'od when he knew that she was in there with that prisoner good thing that Lena got between them when she did. Kiera needs to know what all would happen if she decides to be fully mated to Gray and I think Lena is the best person to tell her.
Oh I have thoughts and ideas on this dark one but I am hoping I am wrong about it. Very excited to see this new chapter yayaya another great chapter! Cant wait for your next post!
Love it!
So very glad you came back to Lit! I thought you were gone for good. Love the story and the characters, although Kiera's behavior sometimes comes across as irritating, but that's just me. =)
Anyway, like I said, glad you're back and hope to read another chapter soon.
I am thrilled!
Thank you for being back, indeed!
This is so fascinating, I can hardly wait.
Good luck with all your writing!
Loved it!!
I'm so glad you've submitted again and continued your story!! I was on the brink of giving up hope :( As always though, your story was amazing and well worth the wait!
awesome*****
I still love that attraction between Grayson and Kiera, and I love the powers Kiera has. Wonderful chapter!
awesome
just gets better and better
Blah!
So mean. More please!
~hzl
I love this series. Glad you're back. Keep writing.
can't wait ...
for the next installment!!
I love this series!
I want to know more...please keep this installment coming *s*
That was very very mean to leave us there! I love the series. This chapter was great as it upped the ante by adding the 'dark creature' and showing us how powerful Kiera is. I look forward to Lena's talk with her and hope there is more to it than the commonly accepted aspects of the mating. I was really impressed with the scene where Grayson loses control. You wrote it really well and I felt like I could feel his rage as well as picture it. I'd like to see you write a scene where we get a better picture of Allistaire. We've gotten to know Lena somewhat (and I loved her being able to stand up to Gray...she'll be a good example for Kiera as she accepts her role) I found this story when this new chapter came out but I got from the comments that there was a lot of time between chapters. I really hope you bring us a new one soon. I also hope that we get to know Gray a bit better maybe as a leader and on a more personal level. We know more about Kiera and her past and how she is today than we do about him. We mainly have been exposed to his lust and passion for her. We get that he helped make the pack very prosperous and he clearly has made them a force to be reckoned with the way he's organized their defenses, etc. What might the dark creature want his blood for. What makes him special? I'd like to know more about his personality and something of his past to see how he's a good match for her.
good story
Don't be a meany and leave it here to long. I'm hooked on this story.
Welcome back & Thank you....
Looking forward to reading much more and hoping that it won't take near as long this time.
Thanks for continuing...
LR
This story is freakin' fantastic!!!!! I am now on edge to finish it, so please write and post the next chapter as soon as possible!!
Wonderful chapter
only hope you will not take to long to complete this story as it has taken forever to get to this point. I so want them mated.
what happened next??/
ei ei ei.... where is the next chapter. you are taking your sweet time. hmmm... :) please post!!! :)
ROFLMAO!
Let me say first.... I love Kiera! Any woman who can walk up to a werewolf and unleash her own is a plus in my book! When Gray found her and was so angry he wanted to mate and so did she, the whole end made me laugh out loud!
Great Story! Keep it comin
I love this story
I love this story! Please keep it going and write more soon!!!!!
more please
I'm hooked I started reading this a few hrs ago and just couldn't stop please update soon!!!!
Grayson in Trouble
I think that after Keira finds out what mating with Grayson means and actually gets ahold of her emotions that Grayson is either going to be hit hard with her emotions when he gets back or a very pissed of Keira.
I'm surprised that she was willing to go back to his apartment after all that. I would have thought that she'd run away from him. If Lena is about to explain what a mate is, she may still run. He is being high-handed even for an alpha male. Great story!
Glad you were finally able to add another chapter...
I am in love with these characters. I can't wait until they actually go through with the mating rituals. I think Kiera and Grayson are a great match. I am a little surprised she decided to go willingly to his apartment, especially after what just took place between them. But I'm so eager to find out what happens next. Please don't wait too long to update your series. Thanks for the submission!
good luck to Grayson
he's gonna need it! will the next installment be up soonish??
omg
i wasnt expecting hiim to attack her like that but it was hot. cant wait to find out wat will happen next plz dont keep me waiting to long.
report ;-)
im reporting this story for awesomeness. wow can't wait for the next chapter i am absolutely loving it so much. the characters so far are exceptional an the storyling is sublime keep up the fantastic imagination.
Wow
All I can say is wow. This story is amazing. I rated each chapter 5 stars
CRICKET!!!
Oh COME ON!!! I always have to wait and I can't wait anymore!! Does Kiera kick his ass for going all Alpha on her or what?? ARRRRRGHHH I hate waiting!!! If you don't post the next chapter soon i'm gonna DIE!! =^_^= PK
Drives me crazy...
I love this story and I have checked back often for updates. It drives me crazy when it takes YEARS for a story to wrap up. I really thought you were going to finish this story back in March but I guess I was wrong. You wrote a few chapters in 2008, a few in 2009, skipped 2010 all together and wrote 2 chapters March 2011. *sigh*
This is a great story and I really want to read an ending to it. PLEASE finish the story or at least say that you are not going to finish it anytime soon.
please update!
I really really like this story and I can't wait to read what Lena is going to say!!
Hurry
Pls hurry!!!!! Liking the tension and how it turns to passion. Continue;)
We are begging!!
Please finish the story!!! your killing us!
More
The wait is killing me!!!
Please write more
Oh come on!!!
9 chapters in three years! Is sad for those of us who have been waiting so long.
Are you ever going to post another chapter?
Would love to see the rest of this story!
Glad to see you back!
Nice to see more to this story. Hope your muse will help you work your magic and continue writing.
Excellent!
I got lucky and found your story and read all 9 chapters. Although I can truly say that I would love for you hurry up and finish, I know how fickle the muse is. I look forward to your next chapter(s) when you are feeling the fires of creation again. Thank you for a very enjoyable read.
Cricket darlingggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
My girl....my girl.............my girl......
I understand that one has life outside of writing, but this was so damn good!!!
Please don't rush...we all want quality, not just words on a page.
So looking forward to another chapter in your time.
Please keep writing!
Please continue, this is the hottest story I have read in a long time. I love Kiera's strength, and Gray's response to it... Anxiously awaiting the next chapter!
Please cricket moreee
Such an enjoyable story i cant wait for your next chapters muahhhh
your such a talented writer. please update this story soon.
Wonderful story! I hope you get a chance to finish it!
Nooo!
Oh gosh, you can't leave me hanging like this...I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT! Like I said before, you are VERY talented, keep doing what you are doing. I am really enjoying this story.
Love,
Your Number 1 Fan
great...
that's a great follow up to ch. 8. but everyone is right, too short, give us more, etc.
You have my attention!
Please come back to this story--I would love to read more.
more please!
Please Post Next Chapter
Please Please Post Next Chapter Soon
Second read....
Darling love the dynamics between the principal characters especially Gray and Lena.
There are a million questions hanging out there. Will you be answering them soon?
Understand life is demanding....no problem just eager for more of this story.
love it!!!
wait wait wait!!! why did you stop???!!! omg im in love with this story please continue !!!
Please continue this story! I love all the characters!
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