A Fall From Grace

Fantastic competition story

I was captivated by the skill of the writer and so excited by the mature content, a truly sexual story which gripped me so much.

Thanks for the Credit, Silk

Hope you win it!

very nice

that was super hot. got me so hard. i love your stories. there so devilish and super hot. i love the black mail the forced lesbian stories. makes me so hard just knowing there is a women like you with a wonderful mind like this. its like being suduced by you. seeing into your kinky devilish mind. knowing you really would love to be part of all the kinky stories you write.
thanks for the wonderful story i think you have one erotic hot sexy mind. dam its like you can fuck me with your story and i can do nothing but keep reading and love every bit of it. so thanks again. keep up the good mind fucking of all who love your stories.

Hot

Great as usual, hope you think about future chapters in this story.

Mmm,,,,

Sexy story that really fits the theme. Good luck in the contest.

Why do lesbian stories

Seem to have so much anger and a need for control and force? It's like the authors feel like being lesbian is a punishment that the want to force upon other women.

That's kinda messed up.

Too much control and anger..

couldn't there have been a more gentle side to the whole thing?

ANother awesome article

Simply love reading them and getting wet. Keep them cumming sweety.

My compliments...

I so enjoy your stories...so provocative and alluring. Please keep them 'cumming'

Thank you

Topical scenario. wouldn't it be wonderful if the world's problems could be solved in such a way, but would it create new problems?

Politics

It would've been a decent story if there weren't any politics in it. The ending is also ridiculous. Shareholders of the company would be suspicious and resistant to the sudden change and would demand those people involved to be fired. Things like this don't work so simply in real life.

Liked it!

Ha, Epic Oil XD

I got totally distracted by the part about how she bullied a twenty-something's mother on email and myspace... since myspace didn't exist and a high schooler def. didn't have access to email twenty plus years ago

BUT I enjoyed the story overall.

liked the story but it would have been more of a punishment for victoria if she were made to give multiple orgasms before she could achieve one herself with her staying on the brink and getting hornier with each one.

Story Was Hot!

But though there are no mind controlling sprays in existence! An injection of a mind drug could have made the story more realistic! As for an oil company giving in to environmentalists, as others have commented would not happen! Oil companies do pay for damages caused by oil spills, but the money hardly ever gets to the people whose lives are affected! The Government gets the fines, and hardly give it to the people, the story could have ended with the CEO being fired or replaced, after her lesbian sexcapades went public! Still a very sexy story!

Great fantasy story

The story had a comic book quality to it with the superheroes go after the evil corporation type theme with a pot load of sex to spice it up. The story has plausibility as today's technology doesn't provide a magic mind control spray. At least not known to the everyday people. In spite of plausibility, the story was well written and it was quite readable and entertaining. Thanks author!

Jasmine, I continue to love your stories. I must admit, they make me very horny. it also makes me think that you are very much a lesbian. it seems to me that no one could write from this perspective unless that is their sexual inclination. you write with so much more joy in a lesbian story, that somehow you must feel it yourself. It would seem to me that if you think otherwise, that you are bi, you might be kidding yourself. your stories, more often than not, reflect on yourself. I mean no disrespect, for I have great respect for you and your work, and I am probably wrong, but that's how it seems to me.

-ken

fun

This is fun, but shallow. Nothing is ever said about where the spray came from. Is it a by-product of the oil company's research lab? Is it a college chemistry experiment? Is it a Wiccan Charm on a bottle of White Diamonds? We're never told. What happened to the Board of Directors? Its obvious to anyone with knowledge of how a corporation does business that the Board would have to be controlled. It'd be nice to read about the Old Folks Home adventures. I'm especially interested in the often neglected lives of the elderly. How they are expected to have forgotten such an important part of their lives. Victoria's orders are too general. 'You'll obey anybody's orders'', You'll only cum when you make someone else cum, she's only allowed to cum when told she can, she has double the cum from anal sex. And the intruders, the future Mistresses, cannot agree on the timeing or the rules. Should they not have had all of this worked out before getting by security and breaking in?Who DID Victoria fuck to get to the top? Some unanswered questions here. It isn't reasonable to order someone to be constantly horney. Soon the impact of the orgasm would cease to be at all special, and thought she would continue to obey orders, the pleasure of the Mistress watching her in her need to cum would be diminished.

HOT!!!!!!!!

super hot but needs sequel

Great story, I love thinking about mind control, I love the fact that they use a spray on her...

Me and my wife often role play where I "hypnotize" her, and make her my slut, but I mean, it's all for fun, I would love to do something like that for real

Normaly I don´t like minde control, because it´s always a bit of raping in it... but in this case I would love to read more about Victoria!

More asthon pls.

I like the mind control okay, what I love is the mistress thing mostly. Would love a day in the life of Ashton and her pet Victoria.