Honey Dippers

Another great feel good story from a master.

Loved the story and despite the smelly background, the young man came up smelling like Roses.

Reap what you sew, true. Honey Dippers know and now you do too....

DG,

What? still don't know where shit comes from.... anonymous assholes.

Ha! I remember that every time the comments are whinny, complaining and anonymous. Great story. Glad you thought of that premise, DG.

Thank you very much for sharing on Lit.


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A sweet earth day story

Well done!

A nicely written and edited story with a good ending, nothing else needs to be said.

Thanks for the good read.

A Classic, Sweet Romance

Some tension, well written in the staccato style

Good Story, as always

I keep forgetting that DG is a good guy and am expecting a sting around every corner! Very enjoyable...

Wonderful story

You are a pen of many talents! Just a wonderful story you really should write more romance. Although your loving wives stories are still some of my favorites

Good Story

I really liked the story, well written most of all a happy ending.

The slogan I saw on the side of a truck that I really like is "Your shit is our bread and butter" lol

DG, The Old Master

Great story as always! Fantastic premise brilliantly handled. Quibbles follow by feedback. I don't want to break the spell with grammar.

Well done

Not much else to say, Well done

I should have said...

I liked it, NO SHIT!!!

Great story

A great story as usual!

As the Roman Emperor Vespasian said "Pecunia non olet" ("money does not stink") when his son objected tohis instituting of a human waste tax.

Truly a great Author

I have enjoyed the stories from you more than I can ever express!

Fun Story

You have a great way with words. I personally am friends with a great guy who is a honey dipper (never heard that one before!). We met when I called him out to clean our our tanks. Some of my more high brow friends were discussing politics. They politely asked him his opinion. He said, "Well, I am just your normal, everyday typical shit man, so I don't have one." We all cracked up and gained a new friend.
About my only complaint is minor. When you suspect drugging, call the cops.
Regards,
ttom

Awesome

Always love you romance stories although I was a little worried when your story began but talking about toilets :) Good luck in the contest.

What A Crock!!!!!!!!

Of good writing. (Thank You) for a great read.

Nice job

Nice story, DG. Good to see the good guys win -- to come up smelling like roses, if you will. :)

Fabulous story!

I loved the story, keep em coming!

All I can say is thank you

I loved your story! Thanks again.

Amazing

You are such an amazing writer I've read many of your stories on here and this is one of the best. Great job :).

Oh, that was a genuine and romantic story! What a fabulous wedding Day! Redemption for Jason's reputation was sweet! I'm still slightly doubtful of the whole "people-can-change" thing, but I think that Jason certainly did grow up and become a good man. Goodluck!

~Luna

Interesting and informative

Although I thought it might have been a bit too long, and there was some repetition early in the story. I also like to see the good guys win.

I heard the terms "honey bucket" and "honey cart" used in Japan. Most of the private toilets, (benjos) least when I was there, did not flush. Instead, workers came by regularly to clean them out using buckets and dump the waste into pushcarts, and I believe most of the shit was made into fertilizer.

I enjoyed it.

DG, you've got a new fan. This is the second story of yours that I have read and I enjoyed it very much. You write with a depth of feeling I envy. Please continue to bless us with your offerings of prose.

Interesting

There was almost no conflict. I guess there is a reason that bodice ripper romances have pirates, and English Lords etc to give them an excuse to have a romance.

I liked the characters but the drama was done in the second act.

sweet love story

i liked it - you get a 5 - as usual.

loved it

well written. i love a happy story that all is well.

True romance -

I think this rates with the top handful of stories for - I enjoyed all aspects of it - no one got seriously hurt or abused (at least within the confines of the story) and the whitish hats (heh) won.

Thank you -

Something about your stories

Somehow I can't stop reading them.
The conversations always seem stilted. Very few contractions like most people use. Short abrupt sentences that remind me of reading a 3rd grader's story, and a bad case of overuse of commas.
Read some of the other writers on here or take a course.
You do tell a great story. You just don't tell it well.
I still gave you a 4.

best one I ever saw

Might be shit to you but its bread and butter to me
as usual good story.

Ouch!

Now I will admit to spreading a full load of turkey shit on the Sheriff's front yard many years ago. But that was only to help his grass and open up his nose. A car full of shit (PRICELESS). One of your best thoughts ever.

a good and funny story

like they say....where there is muck...there is money....liked the bit where he ruined the two assholes cars...but the girls should have filed attempted rape charges for drugging them...