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by twelveoone03/27/11

confessional poetry

at its most direct? not a bad save at the end. A 5, barely, suffers from too little more thought, too much I mush.

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by butters03/27/11

ah, the I's have it, though

it is in the nature of the confessional, when reciting one's sins to the priest, to list them starting with 'I'...

i like the take on, the confessing through the keyboard. does it bring absolution, or doesn't the narrator care for that?

what penance, what scourge? the laying open of a soul to scorn of the e-world?

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by Anonymous03/28/11

interesting take on the confessional

Many poets find themselves confessing in each and every poem. My criticism would be, you're confessing everything but your actual sins.
-WilliamButlerYeats

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