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by michaeliam

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nomoretears00nomoretears00about 13 years ago
Okay...

Now I'm curious how he did that!

NellaBarely2NellaBarely2about 13 years ago
WE NOW what they did!

We know What they did, we just don't know how you would more fully describe it for the rest of us with your smoothly crafted talent for writing erotic material. This can be several more episodes bringing these two gents up to full speed without the typical short story rush. Details can be bring up the heat to a hotter flame, and bring them down to glowing embers. Otherwise one could get burned; including the reader. LOL

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