All Comments on 'Make Me Your Bad Habit'

I give this a 5 just because I like it. Good rhythm and flow with rhymes that fall perfectly into place. A light poem with touches of humor. Good!

I would change the emphasis from "oh soooooo nice" to "ohhhhhhh so nice" Also get a three syllable adverb in front of entice in "let me entice".

interesting writing..shows the emotion of wanting to be used at will in all the ways..yet no kicking..i understand..could he call you names?