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The Family Secret

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/17/11

?

what a load of drivel

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by Anonymous11/17/11

Wow...

That was hot and I didn't even know I was into that!

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by Anonymous11/17/11

More Please

This is one of the hottest stories I've read for a while, with the sister/ aunt arriving at the end I think there's room for expansion, please write another chapter or something similar, and possibly dial the aggression from the daughter up by 5%, and possibly make the mother more submissive,

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by mschack6311/17/11

five stars from me

I have to laugh at the the first anonymous poster who takes the time to read the entire story before calling it a load of drivel.
I would take a star back if I knew how though, because of the 12" cock.

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by Anonymous11/17/11

WOW!

I sure wasn't expecing that. I can't wait to read more!

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by silver76611/20/11

Hot!!!!!!

I'm with anonymous, I didn't know I would be into this, it defintely caught me by suprise. Your story is seriously hot! Please continue it.


Thank you from miss silver766.

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by Anonymous11/25/11

hmm

eewwwYES. Strange. Why does this story feel hot?!? Should have voted 4 but hit 3 just cuz Weird but very Erotic and.. Did I mention Odd? OK so Yes! Would very much like to see more. w

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by Kirilios_Xian12/22/11

Hot Redheads! Hell Yeah!

I wholehartedly concur! We need more of this story!

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by Anonymous12/26/11

source material

I cant help but notice the names. Nicole and Priya. Innocentdickgirls.com?

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by Twistedpleasures01/10/12

Glad it's (mostly) gone over well!

Glad this is at least as hot as it is strange! I am working on a follow-up, but I only write when I'm REALLY into it, so it might be a while before it's finished.

As to the Nicole-Priya connection: Good Catch! Of course it's a nod to IN-DG (a great site for the fetish). I wouldn't say "source material," but it can be if that fleshes out the universe better for you!

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by Belphegor04/02/12

Rarity and Quality

Thanks for writing this! I rarely, if ever, am able to find a properly edited story about dickgirls fucking women. For some reason, it's almost always about them "pegging" males instead, which is on par with Lemonparty for me in terms of boner-killing ability.

In fact, I'm feeling inspired. I think I'll finally be able get to work on a few ideas of my own now.

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by Anonymous03/28/13

wish you would write more about Morgan and Nicole. I wish iw as in Morgan's place. My daughter is lovely but doesn't have equipment like Nicole.

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by Anonymous02/13/14

Sequel?

Would you ever consider a sequel? Really enjoyable.

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by Anonymous11/21/14

Dammit futa incest, that's what i like, moarrrr of this please.

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by Anonymous10/10/15

amazing!

Hoping for series :D

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by Anonymous12/21/16

'Twas fun 2 read, easily one of my favs. Looking forward to similar works in the future :-)

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