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original idea well done, it could do with some editing though cut out a lot of the 'she' / 'she was' /'she would'
maybe;
moist lips kiss my neck,
nibble my ear,
press her pelvis into me
I agree......
.......some of the "woulds" could go but over all I like this.
"We almost never spoke.
I knew that she would do anything I asked.
But I never asked.
Why is it that now, after all these years,
She is the one I remember? "
A fine finish.
Tess.
*****
Five.
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