All Comments on 'Madeleine Ch. 02'

As usual, up to Jack's high standards. But too short, and it ended in the middle of a sentence. Maybe something major is missing?

story so far; the details, the dialogue, the background all contribute to the creation of a story with real promise to become a special read!

And of course explains the origin of the French Kiss... in US usage.

Beautifully structured up until the last couple of lines which are weird!

That last line should not be there. It was somehow added in the submission process. It should end with the phrase, "my life was complete." I've informed the moderator about the glitch, and hopefully it will be removed as soon as possible. The next few chapters will be longer.

I enjoy all of your postings but what caught my eye was the title. My wife's name is Madeleine and seeing it refreshed my memories of her and our life together. Thanks.

You narrative and dialogue just flows along.

Wow! Very, very nice . . .