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Ceremony of Rebirth

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/02/11

Pretty Good

The story was very erotic, but it might have made more sense if you had started the story with a paragraph or two introducing the setting and the reason for the ritual. Also, the change in verb tenses in the first couple paragraphs was a bit distracting.

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by PrincessErin04/03/11

Mmm...

A creative little story with some hot sex. Good luck in the contest.

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by LunaEroticaMystica04/17/11

Your descriptive imagery was yummy! Goodluck! :)

~Luna

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