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by Anonymous

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by PrincessErin04/06/11

Sexy

A sweet little sexy story. Good luck in the contest.

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by hoo_hoo_boo04/08/11

Thank you

Nice story. I like the imagination. Good Luck.

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by LunaEroticaMystica04/17/11

Tricksy Pixies!

Oh those tricksy pixies! Somehow, I don't think the girls were too disappointed that they didn't heed wise elder advice. I hope the wide world of men can, um, measure up to her expectations. ;)*giggles* This was a fun little first story. Goodluck!

~Luna

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by playfullelf04/19/11

Thanks!

Thank you all so much for your comments! Its very nice to hear these things about my (indeed) first try!

A very grateful elf :)

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