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Mass Effect: I Want You, I Need You

byMeanBlackjack©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/03/11

Great work

Wow. Great fanfiction for one of the best sci-fi stories out there. Keep em coming!

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by avidreader_0104/04/11

interesting concept

it took a moment to go from John Sheppard to Alice Shepard but the trip was hilarious. the banter b/t the two was funny, lol, oh man I would have loved to hear their explanation to Mordin & his crazy rambling response. lol I wouldn't be surprised if Mordin wanted to dissect Sheppard to study the effects of a turian/human mating.

Since you're writing odd pairings, what do you think would happen if Jack hooked up with Grunt(although I prefer Wrex)... how wild & violent would that be :)-- this is not a hint, *cough* hint, hint. lol

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by MaitreNuit04/04/11

I'm impressed

I'd never guessed you to be a fanfiction man. I was wrong.
Thumbs up and my respect.

Great story and great characters.

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by B5900104/24/11

Brilliant Story

Very nice piece of fanfiction, the end was particularly nice, using that rather excellent bit of dialogue from the game.

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by inyotefi05/27/11

story nailed

Caught your e mail, and I'm flattered that you asked for my review of this story: to be fair I've never played a female Shepard so can't say much about that, as for plot and character development, you captured it nicely great job.

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by PurrfectMoon07/03/11

Great job!

I think you picked up on their characteristics very well! I loved the story! Great job!

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by HeyAll12/20/11

Beautiful

I loved it. Very erotic and sexy. I especially loved the oral sex scene. You're an excellent writer.

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by ilego10/08/12

Good

Read on some other site

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by Anonymous12/25/12

Whatchoo talking about?

Shepard's a redhead. :P

Seriously, though, a good read.

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by _squishie08/13/16

Awesome!

I love me some Garrus, and you reminded me why I do!

You got the characters so well; could hear their fimilar voices during the banter.

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