All Comments on 'Mass Effect: I Want You, I Need You'

Wow. Great fanfiction for one of the best sci-fi stories out there. Keep em coming!

it took a moment to go from John Sheppard to Alice Shepard but the trip was hilarious. the banter b/t the two was funny, lol, oh man I would have loved to hear their explanation to Mordin & his crazy rambling response. lol I wouldn't be surprised if Mordin wanted to dissect Sheppard to study the effects of a turian/human mating.

Since you're writing odd pairings, what do you think would happen if Jack hooked up with Grunt(although I prefer Wrex)... how wild & violent would that be :)-- this is not a hint, *cough* hint, hint. lol

I'd never guessed you to be a fanfiction man. I was wrong.

Thumbs up and my respect.

Great story and great characters.

Very nice piece of fanfiction, the end was particularly nice, using that rather excellent bit of dialogue from the game.

Caught your e mail, and I'm flattered that you asked for my review of this story: to be fair I've never played a female Shepard so can't say much about that, as for plot and character development, you captured it nicely great job.

I think you picked up on their characteristics very well! I loved the story! Great job!

I loved it. Very erotic and sexy. I especially loved the oral sex scene. You're an excellent writer.

Read on some other site

Shepard's a redhead. :P

Seriously, though, a good read.

I love me some Garrus, and you reminded me why I do!

You got the characters so well; could hear their fimilar voices during the banter.