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by BigJohn60104/02/11

Well written flash story....

Liked the story, but I felt it needed a bit more substance and background to truly make it a romance. Keep it up.

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by 2275jr05/11/11

its what you didnt say that got me thinking

i love it. it the way you talk that does more than what not said.
your a real great writer, andi should know i both write and read a lot. i love the flow of your words . as i say it not what you write it what you dont but leave it widfe open got my cock hard . don't stop now your on a roll more please more gifted wrapped . i could think of more to put in here and so can you., your holding back im sure love both the writing and that story.,

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