by bill33
Seems a bit like cheating to me....good to confess, better to have permission before hand. She says he means so much to her, yet she has few qualms about a relationship with Lynn....something a bit wrong there I think....
Sorry, just a 2nd comment. I so enjoyed the last chapter and this one was so disappointing, not that it wasn't well written or hot-it was. Just that it felt so much like a "cheating wife" story, I felt let down by her, by her actions with Lynn.....guess I just felt she was better then that, especially after the last chapter. So, I was pretty disappointed that she would intentionally "betray" him.....his colleague was right-he is gentle, but she will hurt him in the end.
Nothing is going to compare to your emotional chapters, but these kinds are fun. In response to the comment below, I always got the impression that he had instructed Lynn to mess with her. I can't imagine he would be that naive. I think he will think it's hot, but I don't think she can push this one too far or it's just going to get tacky. I'd feel better if he had a hand in it. lol
-R