All Comments on 'Accustomed to Her Face Ch. 24'

by bill33

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m48gunnerm48gunnerabout 13 years ago
Seems Wrong

Seems a bit like cheating to me....good to confess, better to have permission before hand. She says he means so much to her, yet she has few qualms about a relationship with Lynn....something a bit wrong there I think....

m48gunnerm48gunnerabout 13 years ago
Sorry

Sorry, just a 2nd comment. I so enjoyed the last chapter and this one was so disappointing, not that it wasn't well written or hot-it was. Just that it felt so much like a "cheating wife" story, I felt let down by her, by her actions with Lynn.....guess I just felt she was better then that, especially after the last chapter. So, I was pretty disappointed that she would intentionally "betray" him.....his colleague was right-he is gentle, but she will hurt him in the end.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Girlfriends!

Nothing is going to compare to your emotional chapters, but these kinds are fun. In response to the comment below, I always got the impression that he had instructed Lynn to mess with her. I can't imagine he would be that naive. I think he will think it's hot, but I don't think she can push this one too far or it's just going to get tacky. I'd feel better if he had a hand in it. lol

-R

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