A very sexy little tale, with a well-done sex scene. I really enjoy passionate sex scenes with "sperm crazy" women (especially if they're trying to get pregnant) and this one did not disappoint. I particularly liked it when she was telling him to "cum for her" as he was about to climax.
I thought it would've been a bit more engaging though, if Rhea had been developed a bit more. Why put this grand plan of hers into action now, and why'd she choose Alex over all the other male environmentalists across the globe?
English
I really liked it ... U were able to really portray vivid imagery throughout the story and the ending was a nice "blasé " . ;)
Sexy
A great short, sexy, story. Good luck in the contest.
YOU HAVE OBVIOUSLY WRITTEN NUMEROUS
stories, and maybe I should sample some. I just couldn't get past someone having a dream and not a very real one. Sorry.
Nice Story
A very sexy little tale, with a well-done sex scene. I really enjoy passionate sex scenes with "sperm crazy" women (especially if they're trying to get pregnant) and this one did not disappoint. I particularly liked it when she was telling him to "cum for her" as he was about to climax.
I thought it would've been a bit more engaging though, if Rhea had been developed a bit more. Why put this grand plan of hers into action now, and why'd she choose Alex over all the other male environmentalists across the globe?
Thank you!
Love the concept- imagination is important- good luck!
Great analogy
Writing is good. Writing with several layers is even better. Well done.
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