All Comments on 'Rhea'

I really liked it ... U were able to really portray vivid imagery throughout the story and the ending was a nice "blasé " . ;)

A great short, sexy, story. Good luck in the contest.

stories, and maybe I should sample some. I just couldn't get past someone having a dream and not a very real one. Sorry.

A very sexy little tale, with a well-done sex scene. I really enjoy passionate sex scenes with "sperm crazy" women (especially if they're trying to get pregnant) and this one did not disappoint. I particularly liked it when she was telling him to "cum for her" as he was about to climax.

I thought it would've been a bit more engaging though, if Rhea had been developed a bit more. Why put this grand plan of hers into action now, and why'd she choose Alex over all the other male environmentalists across the globe?

Love the concept- imagination is important- good luck!

Writing is good. Writing with several layers is even better. Well done.

And as time passed, Rhea gave birth to a son. And he would be called... Captain Planet.