All Comments on 'One Night'

by GirlWithBoots

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Reborn1997Reborn1997over 7 years ago
Nooooo

You ruined a great story. This could have lead into a fantastic story and then you had to ruin it with the last paragraph!

Writing needs to be improved but generally good.

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