but writing was poor. I gave up quibbling, as it was becoming rewriting. You might wish to have a copy editor as well as a story editor.
Very well done. I enjoyed the romance and passion interwoven into the storyline and your writing was fine. Keep up the good storytelling!
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Story was hot
but writing was poor. I gave up quibbling, as it was becoming rewriting. You might wish to have a copy editor as well as a story editor.
Wonderfully romantic.
Very well done. I enjoyed the romance and passion interwoven into the storyline and your writing was fine. Keep up the good storytelling!
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