This story is developing into a potential classic. The young authoress has set the scene for a promising storyline with unlimited possibilities. If there is to be any criticism at all, it is that both chapters should have been combied into a single chapter. Notwithstanding that minor criticism, I look foward to her next submission (no pun or double entendre intended).
by
Anonymous04/04/11
Ooooohhhhh!
This is good. Keep going! This story is really getting me wet, for MY Daddy!
by
Anonymous04/05/11
Yes, Yes, Yes
I want my wife to watch me fuck our daughter while she plays with her own tits and cunt. Then I want her to guide my hard cock into our daughter's pussy while she sucks her titties. Then she can lick our daughter's pussy while I fuck her doggie-style. After all, the family that sucks together fucks together.
by
Anonymous04/05/11
to little
Nice enough story but to much teasing length wise - some people write 2 or more pages so that there is at least some chapters - this is wriiten in paragraphs.
Why publish it in this way? if it is being written as you go along which I find hard to accept it would only make sense to post when it is at least part one of a story......this is hard work to read when it finishes before it starts.......good story poor posting
by
Anonymous04/12/11
Good Writting
Only a bit forced. Mom's suggestion is somewhat out of left field. But, if I was dad, very exciting. Mom joining in makes it so hot, permission is obvious. Longer segments would be good for those of us who are using you to jack off and shoot our loads for our own daughters. For such a young lady are you still very much a daddy's girl or a non-virgin who is just attracted to fatherly types? I'd like to know more about you and your youthful fantasies or coupleings with family members. Will mother use her sons to feel new and different cocks? Keep writting, you're good.
English
please continue on with this story...
pretty please...
pretty please with sugar on top...
A new talent has emerged.
This story is developing into a potential classic. The young authoress has set the scene for a promising storyline with unlimited possibilities. If there is to be any criticism at all, it is that both chapters should have been combied into a single chapter. Notwithstanding that minor criticism, I look foward to her next submission (no pun or double entendre intended).
Ooooohhhhh!
This is good. Keep going! This story is really getting me wet, for MY Daddy!
Yes, Yes, Yes
I want my wife to watch me fuck our daughter while she plays with her own tits and cunt. Then I want her to guide my hard cock into our daughter's pussy while she sucks her titties. Then she can lick our daughter's pussy while I fuck her doggie-style. After all, the family that sucks together fucks together.
to little
Nice enough story but to much teasing length wise - some people write 2 or more pages so that there is at least some chapters - this is wriiten in paragraphs.
Why publish it in this way? if it is being written as you go along which I find hard to accept it would only make sense to post when it is at least part one of a story......this is hard work to read when it finishes before it starts.......good story poor posting
Good Writting
Only a bit forced. Mom's suggestion is somewhat out of left field. But, if I was dad, very exciting. Mom joining in makes it so hot, permission is obvious. Longer segments would be good for those of us who are using you to jack off and shoot our loads for our own daughters. For such a young lady are you still very much a daddy's girl or a non-virgin who is just attracted to fatherly types? I'd like to know more about you and your youthful fantasies or coupleings with family members. Will mother use her sons to feel new and different cocks? Keep writting, you're good.
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