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PLEASE GIVE FEEDBACK

This is PrettyBadKittyKat, and I am desperately looking for constructive criticism. I am seriously considering putting together a collection of erotic stories and presenting them to a publisher. So, I would like to know if youguys think I have what it takes. Thanks!

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by Anonymous07/15/12

what i thought

I thought it was perfectly descriptive. Made me wish I could do that yo myself.

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